Brauche Hilfe bei Englisch Bildbeschreibung wer kanns?
Hallo wer kann meine Sätze korrigieren(Rechtschreibfehlern) und vielleicht paar Ergänzungen vom bild hinein ziehen ? Danke im Voraus 😊
1.
The Photo A is a coloured picture.
In the backround there is a garbage dump.
In the middle i can see a sofa.
At the Top is ab boy and her wearing a pullover
In the foreground is a girl she's wearing a Pullover .
Between the girl and the boy is a child he's wearing a orange cardigan .
2.
In the picture b i can see three men and one women.
the man on the left is wearing a yellow t-Shirt and play table football.
The man on the right is wearing a black tshirt and a sunglases on the head.
The women is wearing a black tshirt ,blue trousers and a black sunglases.
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Hier korrigiere ich einmal den Text
1.
Photo a is a coloured picture.
In the backround is a garbage dump.
In the middle i can see a sofa.
At the top is a boy and he is wearing a pullover
In the foreground is a girl. She's wearing a pullover .
Between the girl and the boy is a child. It's wearing a orange cardigan.
2.
In picture b i can see three men and one woman.
The man on the left is wearing a yellow T-Shirt and he is playing table football.
The man on the right is wearing a black tshirt and a sunglasses,
The women is wearing a black tshirt ,blue trousers and black sunglasses
Die Ausführung der Texte kommt gleich. Fehler habe ich fett markiert. Manches habe ich auch weggelöscht, da dies keine Sinn ergab
Lieb Grüße
Niklas
Text Nr. 1
1.
Photo a is a coloured picture.
In the backround is a garbage dump. The three boys are standing next to a trash container .
In the middle i can see a sofa.
At the top is a boy and he is wearing a pullover. The two boys in the backround seem unhappy and a little bit sad, but the little boy in the front smiles..
In the foreground is a girl. She's wearing a pullover .
Between the girl and the boy is a child. It's wearing a orange cardigan.
Text Nr. 2
2.
In picture b i can see three men and one woman.
The man on the left is wearing a yellow T-Shirt and he is playing table football.
The man on the right is wearing a black tshirt and a sunglasses,
The woman is wearing a black tshirt ,blue trousers and black sunglasses. At the back she is wearing a black backpack. The peoples seem happy and they are laughing.
Ich hoffe ich konnte dir helfen :)
Liebe Grüße
Niklas
Ein (zumindest englisches) Wort im Plural kann keine Artikel besitzen, die es nur für den Singular gibt.
a sunglasses... a verlangt den Singular, und wenn es den nicht gibt, dann kann man es nicht verwenden
Aber du hast trotzdem den Text gut verbessert :-)
Ah ok danke für den Hinweis. Das habe ich übersehen :) Trotzdem danke für das Kompliment :)
The photos A and B are coloured pictures.
In the first picture at the right side there are three children standing behind each other according to their height.
Next to them in the background there is a garbage dump.
Within that garbage dump, there you can find knocked over wooden sticks. It seems to be a bulky waste. There is also a demolished and knocked over sofa.
In picture B there are three men and a woman playing with a football table.
One man, who seems to be younger than the other ones, is wearing a yellow shirt and the other ones are wearing darker shirts.
I bet, they laugh due to a funny goal someone of them has shot.
Those people are standing in a house with bright windows in the background.
Dann halt etwas anderes. Darauf kommt es ja auch nicht an.
Ich Danke dir Vielmals 😬☺️