Cartoon Analyse englisch?

Hey, ich soll ein Cartoon beschreiben und wollte mal fragen, ob es was an meinem Text zu verbessern gibt

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The colored cartoon shows two different pictures. The cartoon on the left side shows a man who is wearing green jeans and a green Sweatshirt. He is lying on a big phone while smiling and playing with a crib mobile. Worth mentioning facts are the social media logos on the crib mobile. The cartoon on the right part shows a dialog with three different parts. In the first part of the cartoon you can see two man talking to each other. The man on the left side is wearing a green shirt and the Man on the right side is wearing a blue shirt. What catches your eyes the most are the speech bubbles. The speech bubble above the man on the left side says „..And literally within seconds I got more than to replies!“ And the speech bubble above the man on the right says „And what did they say?“ In the two other parts of the cartoon the two men are just staring at each other. The caption of the picture says „It‘s the experience“

Danke im Voraus!!

3 Antworten

Xxxxxlldkdkslsl

05.10.2021, 00:04

Darfst du auch schon interpretieren? Falls ja, würde ich noch etwas sagen wie:

,,The cartoon shows that the communication between people is all about social media today. Being happy about replies and making a big conversation out of it seems to be relevant in this cartoon.
The man lying on the ground and reaching out to the symbols of social media seems to make him happy. Thats all we made our world become. People doesn’t like to talk about anything more than this topic, because it’s a part of live for this generation.”

Dazu kann man noch so viel sagen.
ps. Sorry mein english ist schlecht. Hoffe dass es geholfen hat.

Klarisa666

Fragesteller

05.10.2021, 00:06

Dankee!!

therealkickers

05.10.2021, 00:00

Das ist sprachlich ganz ok (paar Kleinigkeiten), nur ist es halt eine absolut reine, sachliche, eigentlich ziemlich irrelevante Beschreibung ohne jegliche Interpretation, Erklärung, Bildsprache oder Analyse.

Bist du sicher, dass nicht eher das die Aufgabe war?

Klarisa666

Fragesteller

05.10.2021, 00:05

Erstmal sollte ich das Bild nur beschreiben, die Analyse und Interpretation kommt danach. (Die habe ich aber noch nicht gemacht). Und danke für deine Antwort!😊

therealkickers

05.10.2021, 00:09

@Klarisa666

Dann passt das soweit, auch wenn ich das echt ungewöhnlich finde.

Ansonsten würde ich folgendes korrigieren:

...What catches your eyes...
im englischen gibt es diese unpersönlich gemeinte "Was Dir auffällt" nicht wie im Deutschen. Da schreib lieber "What catches the eye of the reader" (Auch Singular -> eye, nicht Plural)

...The cartoon on the right part...
Besser: The cartoon on the right side (oder right hand side)

Klarisa666

Fragesteller

05.10.2021, 00:21

@therealkickers

Danke !!

AstridDerPu

Von gutefrage auf Grund seines Wissens auf einem Fachgebiet ausgezeichneter Nutzer

Englisch, englische Grammatik, Englischunterricht

05.10.2021, 06:17

Hallo,

The colored (= AE; BE = coloured) cartoon shows two different pictures. The cartoon on the left side shows a man who is wearing green jeans and a green Sweatshirt (RS). He is lying on a big phone (besser: mobile, cell phone etc.) while smiling and playing with a crib mobile. Worth mentioning facts are the social media logos on the crib mobile. The cartoon on the right part shows a dialog (= AE; BE = dialogue) with three different parts. In the first part of the cartoon (Komma) you can see two man (Grammatik) talking to each other. The man on the left side is wearing a green shirt and the Man (RS) on the right side is wearing a blue shirt. What catches your eyes (the) most are the speech bubbles. The speech bubble above the man on the left side says „..And literally within seconds I got more than to replies!“ (Ist dir der Schreibfehler in der speech bubble aufgefallen?) And the speech bubble above the man on the right says „And what did they say?“ In the two other parts of the cartoon (Komma) the two men are just staring at each other. The caption of the picture says „It‘s the experience“ (Punkt)

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de - und Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!

Das kann aber nur der Anfang einer Cartoon Analysis sein, nämlich eine Beschreibung (description).

Aus den unendlichen Weiten des Internets:

Describe a cartoon:

1. Name source if you can

2. Say who or what the cartoon is about or what it deals with

3. Describe important details

4. Examine the words printed in the cartoon

Die wichtigsten Zeitformen in einer englischen Bild- und Cartoonbeschreibung sind das Present Progressive / Continuous (dynamic verbs: actions); für die Beschreibung, was auf dem Bild geschieht) und das Present Simple ( stative verbs: Verben des Sagens; für die Aussage; say, tell, ask, seem usw.)

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Analyse a cartoon:

1. A cartoon is usually topical, so you will need to say what it refers to

2. Are the characters presented in a positive/negative light?

3. Examine whether the cartoon uses irony, and if it does, what effect this has

4. Explain point, cartoonist is trying to make

MERKE :

Cartoons are often critical -----> recognize/identify them

Read the whole text carefully + examine all symbols…

Be careful when trying to interpret the MESSAGE

Für Beispiele siehe: englisch-blog.com/tips-and-skills/describe-a-cartoon-examplebeispiel/ oder gib bei Google - cartoon description examples ein.

Nützliche Wendungen zur Ana lyse eines Cartoons findest du hier:

abiturerfolg.de/describingpicturesandcartoons.html

Daneben empfehle ich für die Cartoon-Analyse:

https://www.studienkreis.de/englisch/cartoon-analysis-aufbau-beispiele/

http://www.jochenlueders.de/?p=6231

:-) AstridDerPu

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(Link zum Bild)

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