Kann jemand vielleicht meinen Text korriegieren(englisch)?

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Ich muss eine Cartoon Analyse machen und bin gerade bei der description,wenn das jemand für mich korrigieren würde wäre das echt cool.danke schonmal

The cartoon consists of half an airplane with a European flag on it and two men who are in the centre of the picture.The first man in the foreground is wearing a green suit and a hat.He is reaching out his hand with a UK flag.Futhermore he make a step forward to jump out of the airplane.Behind him is another man with blue clothes and a parachute in front of him.in addition,you see two speech bubbles,one about each men.The speech bubble of the man with the blue clothes says”pardon me sir ,may I suggest you to take a parachute with you?”the jumping man is answering “thanks ,the flag will do!”

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Ralfie489

07.03.2022, 19:01

The cartoon consists of half an airplane with a European flag on it and two men who are in the centre of the picture. The first man in the foreground is wearing a green suit and a hat. He is reaching out his hand with a UK flag. Fu r thermore , he make s a step forward to jump out of the airplane. Behind him is another man with blue clothes and a parachute in front of him. I n addition, you see two speech bubbles, one about each men. The speech bubble of the man with the blue clothes says ”pardon me sir, may I suggest you to take a parachute with you?” The jumping man answers “thanks, the flag will do!”

Habe die Änderungen fett-kursiv gemacht.

Scxan16

Fragesteller

07.03.2022, 19:04

Finden sie es ist eine,gute description für das Bild?

Ralfie489

07.03.2022, 19:05

@Scxan16

Es ist alles erwähnt.

AstridDerPu

Von gutefrage auf Grund seines Wissens auf einem Fachgebiet ausgezeichneter Nutzer

Englisch, Abitur

07.03.2022, 20:28

The cartoon consists of half an airplane with a European flag on it and two men who are in the centre of the picture.The first man in the foreground is wearing a green suit and a hat. He is reaching out (Wort) his hand with a UK flag. Futhermore (RS) (Ich persönlich würde hier ein Komma setzen.) he make (Grammatik) a step forward to jump out of the airplane. Behind him (Hier fehlt ein Wort.) is another man with (Präposition) blue clothes (Formulierung) and a parachute in front of him. in (RS) addition, you see two speech bubbles, one about (Präposition) each men (Grammatik). The speech bubble of the man with the blue clothes (s.o.) says (Formulierung; der Mann spricht, nicht die Sprechblase.) (Komma) ”pardon (RS) me sir (RS), may I suggest you to take a parachute with you?” the (RS) jumping man is answering (Grammatik) “thanks (RS), the flag will do!”

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert, das Kursivgedruckte überdacht werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de - und Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!

:-) AstridDerPu

Scxan16

Fragesteller

07.03.2022, 21:33

Wie heißt es denn richtig,also In the speech bubble of the man with the blue clothes reads?

Scxan16

Fragesteller

07.03.2022, 21:33

Und was fehlt nach behind him?

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