Hier ein paar Verbesserungsvorschläge:
I'm from xxx. It's a village very close to xxx.
What I like the most is, that I live in a village where the traffic is not as much as in a city. We still have everything we need, like a supermarket, a swimming pool or a school.
I like to hang out with my friends, and in summer we often go swimming in the lake.
Nun die mögliche weitere Ausführung:
When we hang out, we talk about different topics, like where we will travel soon, or who we are going to visit. Sometimes we also play games, or listen to music. (Das solltest du natürlich nur hinschreiben, wenn es halbwegs passt. ;D)
Hoffe ich konnte dir helfen. :P