Eure Meinung zum Songtext?
Heyy,Ich habe einen Songtext geschrieben und wollte auch hier fragen ob es Verbesserungsvorschläge gibt und wie der Songtext so ankommt.Title: Burnin' Rubber Verse 1: I’m dreamin' of the fast lane, burnin' rubber, gettin' gone, Maybe in a Lambo' until the dawn. But they just want me stuck on this old school grind, While my heart's in the street, and my head’s in the sky.I just wanna be free, I just wanna be me, No more classroom walls, just the world to see. Got my hands on the wheel, don’t worry, I’m in full control, Got visions of the future, they burn in my soul.Pre-Chorus: In my soul, I hear the call, To leave behind these classroom walls. Let’s escape from school, from duties and all stress, Chasin’ dreams, no limits, nothing less.Chorus: My dreams are heavy to reach, I chase my dreams, but they slip away, My future seems grey, That’s why we only pay attention to today, Maybe that’s the right way.Verse 2: I’m dreamin' of the fast lane, burnin' rubber, gettin' gone, Maybe in a Lambo' until the dawn. But they tell me to slow down, stay in my place, But I’m too wild to be tied down by their chase.I wanna break free, I wanna break through, No more rules to follow, just the sky’s perfect blue. With my hands on the wheel, no fear, no regret, Got dreams so big, I haven’t seen them yet.Pre-Chorus: In my soul, I hear the call, To leave behind these classroom walls. Let’s escape from school, from duties and all stress, Chasin’ dreams, no limits, nothing less.Chorus: My dreams are heavy to reach, I chase my dreams, but they slip away, My future seems grey, That’s why we only pay attention to today, Maybe that’s the right way.Bridge: They say I’m too young to know, But I’ve got places I need to go. Don’t tell me to wait, don’t tell me to stay, I’m not bound by your rules, I’m runnin’ away.Chorus: My dreams are heavy to reach, I chase my dreams, but they slip away, My future seems grey, That’s why we only pay attention to today, Maybe that’s the right way.Outro: I’m dreamin' of the fast lane, burnin' rubber, gettin' gone, Maybe in a Lambo' until the dawn. Let’s be free and ignore what they teach, Together we’ll break out, no one can breach. Yeah, maybe in a Lambo' until the dawn.