Selbstbeschreibung in Englisch?

Hallo 🤗 Ich habe morgen eine Mündliche Prüfung in Englisch und wollte wissen, ob die Beschreibung okay ist. 🤔 :

My name is Selma and I'm 15 years old. I'm shy and quiet but also I'm friendly. My favorite colour is Green. I was born on 9nd september in . I've got two older brothers and their names are Max and Luis. My Hobbys are listen to music and meet my friends. I don't have a big circle of friends, but I really love the ones I have. I go on the school * in the 9th class. Every day of my school started at 8pm and ends always at 2pm.

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AstridDerPu

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Englisch

19.05.2019, 18:42

My name is Selma and I'm 15 years old. I'm shy and quiet but also I'm friendly (Satzstellung). My favorite (= AE; BE = favourite) colour (= BE; AE = color) is Green (RS). I was born on (Hier wird "the" gesprochen, aber nicht geschrieben.) 9nd (= Abkürzung für second) (Hier wird "of" gesprochen, aber nicht geschrieben.) september (RS) (---) 20.. . I've got two older brothers and their names are Max and Luis. My Hobbys (RS) are listen (Grammatik) to music and meet (Grammatik) my friends. I don't have a big circle of friends (kein Komma) but I really love the ones I have. I go on (falsche Präposition) (---) * school * in (falsche Präposition) (---) 9th class (zuerst die Klasse, dann die Schule). Every day of my school (Ausdruck) started (Grammatik) at 8pm (= 20 Uhr) and ends always (Position) at 2pm (Satzstellung).

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de - und Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!

:-) AstridDerPu

verreisterNutzer

20.05.2019, 14:50

Danke dir :)

My Presentation

Let me introduce myself.

But first I say something about my family.

My parents come from Turkey. My Mother doesn't work and my Father works in Road construction. I have 1 older sister she is 19 and a little brother he is 5 years old. My sister made a training as a nurse. Then it has aborted. And my brother goes to nursery school.

And now about me.

My name is +++++ ++++and I am 16 years old. I was born in Germany in ++++. I live in Germany in Baden Württemberg and I attend the 9th class of ++++++ School. At school my favorite subject is Math, because I like this subject. At school I think I'm okay. In English I'm not so good but in Math and German I think I’m good. In my class we are 24 students. I can speak German, Turkish and English.

My hobbies are playing football and I play my games on the Computer with my friends but I go outside too. In my free time, I go out with my friends to play football or I watch TV. I love listening to music. My favorite music star is +++++, a ++++ rap star. I have a best friend and his name is ++++. But he’s not here in the school. I hope that I will have a big car, a big house and a beautiful girlfriend.

I hope you enjoyed my presentation about myself.

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English vorstellen in der schule

Hallo Leute es ist so das wir morgen uns auf english vorstellen müssen und das es mindestens 2min lang sein soll passt dieser Text ? und könnt ihr mir vielleicht tipps geben ? danke eure Caro :)

First of all i don't like to introduce myself. My name is xxxx but my nickname is xxxx. I was born on 4th of december in xxxheim. I live at the moment in xxxstadt. thats only a small village. I attend the Realschule from Ebermannstadt and my favourite subjects are art, mathematics and Reli. I have 2 Brothers and 2 sisters. My Brother and sister attends this school too. My other two siblings are visting the elementary school. I would to like to tell you something about my hobbies and interests. I like sport for example riding my Bike but i hate footballe. In the rest of my free time i'm surfing in the internet. I often meet friends and go shopping.After school i want to study. My mottos are from nothing comes nothing and nothing is to be taken for granted

ich hoffe ihr könnt mir weiter helfen ;)

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❌English Arbeit Kummerkasten Tanten❌?

Hallo kann mir bitte jemand helfen wir müssen in der Englisch arbeit jemand helfen als wären wir eine Kummerkasten Tante. Das ist der Text mit den Problem des Schülers : I'm very unhappy because I don't have any friends. The kids at school don't like me. I thnij it's because I'm very good at the lessons. They call me a swot (streber). But I like the lessons and I'm don't find them difficult. Also I'm a quiet fat and I'm not good at sports, so they call me other names. What can I do to find Friends?

Natürlich müssen wir auf englisch antworten:)

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Wir müssen auf Englisch über uns 5 Minuten lang erzählen. Ist der Text so gut und was könnte ich noch zu meinen Hobbys sagen?

Good Morning

Ich want to toll you Something about me My Name is **** but my friends call me *** as a nickname. I am fifteen years old. I have a brohter and a sister there is my brohter the older and He is seventeen years old his Name is **** and my sister is the young so is my brohter eight years older as a my sister her Name is ***. My Parents are Fourty-four years old and my Mum is called *** AT the Moment she is housewife.My dad is called * * * * * and He works as a Firmenname. I live with my Familiy in **** where we live is a big house. MY familiy Come Form ***** all are born in ***** out of my sister our motherlangaue is french furthermore my Familiy and I live SinCe nine year the school in ***** so in my class we are eight pupil there are five boys and three girls. I like my School because I have many interesting subjects it are history and Germany but I don't like sport.In Summer I leave the school because it is my last school years and I want to finish a good exams in order to I go in the secandary school.My Hobby is Swimming because I can good swimming therefore me have it much fun.In Winter I like go schlicht skating when the Weather is Bad I read books and wach TV.In the Week I go swimming twice and Most weekend I Meeting with my friends we go shopping or chillen

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Host Family letter?

Könnte jemand meinen Host Family letter korrigieren für mein Auslandsjahr?

Dear Host Family,

My name is …. and I am … years old. I would like to introduce myself to let you know who I am.

I live with my parents and my little sister in ….. , a small town south of Hamburg. Although my sister and I have different interests, we enjoy spending time together. We live in a beautiful house with a big garden where my family and I like to play. My sister and I each have our own room.

In my free time I love to meet up with my friends or go out for a nice meal with my family. Because I like to do sports, I play tennis with friends, but also golf with my father. Furthermore, I take care of my riding participation. I prefer to go horseback riding with friends in the forest or in the fields, but it's also a lot of fun to do dressage or jumping lessons. What I really like about the hobby is spending time with the horses and taking on responsibility. What I prefer about playing tennis is the discipline that you build up. I also enjoy playing against other people. I love going on vacation with my family and sometimes with my friends.

A normal day in my school week starts at 6:00 o'clock. After I wake up I get ready for the day and leave the house at 7:00 o'clock and then I go to the train station and wait for my train. Then I take the train to … , the next larger city to … . After I arrived at Lüneburg I only need to walk ten minuts or I take the bus. The school starts at 8:00 o'clock until 13-20. At school I meet a lot of my friends and I learn a lot of new things, which is mostly very interesting and a lot of fun. After school I need to rush to the train to don't miss it. When I arrive at home I eat lunch and start to do my homework. After that, I have some free time that I use to go to the horses, for example. I usually go to bed at 9.30 a.m., before that I like to read or just relax a bit.

I'm drawn to America because I want to get to know a new country with its interesting and beautiful sides. I am also interested in the traditions that differ from ours. I would also like to meet new people and make friends and try new things.

In general, I am a very humorous person and like to learn new things. I've always dreamed of traveling to America and I'm glad to have this chance now.

I really enjoy my life in Germany and I'm pretty sure that I will miss my family and my friends a lot.

But I know that this experience of one year with you will be more than worth leaving my home. I am so excited about my year abroad and would be glad to spend this time in America.

Yours …

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England austausch Bewerbung gut so?

Hello! My name is *** and I am thirteen years old. Together with my parents and my two years older brother, I live in a house with a big garden. We have got one little dog called ***. My hometown is ***. In my free time I often play football. Meeting friends like *** *** and surfing in the internet are also one of my favorite leisure activities. My favorite subjects are all languages. I am not so happy with subjects concerning to numbers like Maths and Physics. My family and my friends say about me that I am reliable, polite and I have a good behavior. Although I have travelled through many countries, I have never been in England before. For me the exchange would not only mean having fun but the possibility to make acquaintance with a new country and interesting people. I I would be very glad to take part at the exchange with ***(my school)

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Gastfamilien Brief, ich mache 22/23 ein Auslandsjahr in den USA und würde gerne wissen ob ich Fehler in meinem Brief habe oder irgendwas neu schreiben sollte?

Dear future host family. First of all, I would like to thank you for reading my letter and giving me the opportunity to live in the USA for ten months and being part of your Family.

Now I would like to introduce myself. My name is xxx, xxx for short, and I am xx years old (turning xx in February)

I am living in xxx with my Family which consists of my mum, my sister, my brother and our dog Cooper. I love animals but unfortunately, I am allergic to cats and can’t live with them.

My parents are divorced. My dad lives about 15 minutes away from me with the car, and I also have a big sister, but she is old enough to live on her own. I have a really good relationship to my family, and we all get along pretty well. We try to spend as much time as possibly together, at Holidays, the weekends or on a walk with our dog.

I found some new friends in my new school, and I really like them, they are all extremely different with their personality and looks but at the end they are the kindest people that I have met so far, and I am so grateful for having them. I am already sad thinking about leaving them here in my home country, but they know that it’s my dream to live in the USA for 10 months and they are also excited for me.

I am attending the ninth schoolyear (Highschool). The focus of the school is technology and architecture. I need to take the train to get to the school and also the bus. My grades are good and its easy for me to learn new things, but I am also really clumsy, and I talk a lot and fast, but when I meet someone for the first time, I am really shy but as soon as they get to know me, I talk more.

I am spending my free time at the lake or going on bike rides. I am not doing any sports, but I would love to try something new in the USA, like Track & Field or Cheerleading. Some of my hobbies are swimming, biking, traveling and reading. I love to read. I try to read as many books as I can but it’s difficult because of all the schoolwork. I also love to bake and cook.

My Family and I are often in Italy especially in the summer holidays, my aunt loves to go there and most of the time we are going with her, we are all really close and help each other if we need anything.

I am helping my mum to keep the House clean. I am doing chores like vacuuming, doing the dishes or taking out the trash. We don’t have a chores plan (e.g., who does this chore on this day...) but if my mum asks me to do anything I will do it for her.

My dream is to become an Interior designer and work abroad, and after my graduation I would like to travel the world or be an Au pair in the USA, Australia or Canada.

I am hoping that I can bring you my culture, language and my Country closer by cooking you my favorite dish and teaching you some words in my mother tongue.

The reason why I want to go to the USA is not just to improve my English but to get to know the culture and eating habits and just to see if it really is like in the Movies.

der Rest ist in den Kommentaren.

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5 minuten Englisch Referat HILFE

HALLO ich brauche Dringend eure HILFE !!! ich muss ein Englisch referat machen und habe das Thema: über mich und meine Famiele genommen . naja nun habe ich folgendes Problem das referat ist schon disen Freitag und ich habe schon was Vorbereitet aber dazu brauche ich nur 3 minuten also brauche ich nun eure Hilfe !!!! ich brauche noch 2 minuten Das ist mein Referat.

I want to tell you something about me and my family. My name is Kevin Hansche and I'm fifteen years old. I was born in Berlin and 2005, my parents and I moved to Radolfzell Berlin is a very beautiful city and Berlin is the capital of Germany. But Radolfzell is also very nice. I have found many friends here. The Name of my scool is Radoldoldushool this is in radolfzell and I visit the 9th class. I´m the class President. I have two half brothers, their names are Patrick and Jeffrey. My half brothers live in Berlin, My mother works as a saleswoman and my father works as a bricklayer in Switzerland My Hobbies are cycling and playing football with my frinds. In the summer i like to swimming in the lake and in the winter i like to skiing in the mountains. I also enjoy playing online games by the laptop. I have not a pet, but when i lived in Berlin i had a pet. We have had 2 Degos but they are died Now i like to have a cat but my mum has a allergy. My favorite meal is cutlet and i hate

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Ist dieser Brief gut für die Englischarbeit?

Ich schreibe morgen die Englischarbeit und wir müssen einen Brief über unsere Schule schreiben. Ist dieser folgende Brief gut und was würdet ihr verbessern?:

Dear Sir or Madam
My name is .... and I go to the German school ........... in ............ .It is a comprehensive school. Our school is big, we have about 1000 pupils and about 100 teachers. I go to the class 8.2. In my class we have 26 pupils and our teachers are Mrs..... and Mr.... . My best friend is ........ . I usually go to school by bus. We have school from Monday till Friday. The lessons are 45 minutes long. They start at 8:10 am. and finished at 12:35 pm., 13:25 pm., 15:05 pm. or 15:55 pm.. We have also a morning break that begin at 10:35 am. and finished at 10:55 am. and a lunch break that begin at 12:35 pm. and finished at 13:25 pm.. In our school we have not a school uniform. You can learn different subjects in our school for example English,Biology,German,Math and Sport. I have not a favourite or unpopular subject. A thing you can do in our school are curricular activities. We have a lot of curricular activities. For example a football club, school band, school choir, pet club, different languages club and computer club. Of course we have different rooms for example a library, cafeteria, gym, school office and assembly hall. I like my school, because the most teachers are friendly and they teach us a lot.

Yours faithfully
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Vielen Dank schon mal für eure Antworten. :)

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E-mail an Gastfamilie

Hallo,

Ich mache bald eine Sprachreise in die USA für 4 Wochen und wohne während diesem Zeitraum in einer Gastfamilie, um genau zu sein ist es nur eine Frau. Jedenfalls wollte ich ihr eine E-mail schreiben und mich schonmal vorstellen, allerdings wusste ich nicht so genau was ich schreiben soll und habe mir jetzt mal einen Text überlegt und wollte wissen ob man den so abschicken kann.

Dear Mrs. ....

my name is ....., I'm 19 years old and I'm from Berlin/Germany. I'm really looking forward to meet you. I'm very happy that you have a dog because I love animals. At home I have dog, a rabbit, a tortoise and a budgie. In my freetime I really like it to meet my friends and play with my animals, but sometimes I prefer it to stay at home and spend some time with my family.

I think we are going to have a good time together.

Best regards

Würde das so gehen und habt ihr vielleicht eine Idee was man noch schreiben könnte?

Danke schon im vorraus. :)

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Erörterung englisch überprüfen

hallo :) ich habe eine Erörterung zum Thema Schuluniformen für den englisch unterricht geschrieben, wäre cool wenn ihr mir Tipps zur Grammatik und vielleicht auch Ergänzungen sagen könntet. hier ist sie:

This comment will be about school uniforms. in the USA for example there are schools where you have to wear school uniforms and in germany you dont have to wear them. now the question is if we should introduce school uniforms in germany?

On the one hand school uniforms are very good. when everyone wears the same, nobody can say things because of their look like. so there is less bullying at school. nobody recognize if someone is poor or rich and it's easier for poorer people to find friends. In addition to this the students are a community. All of them are working together. Without school uniforms there are allways some outsider which have to work alone. the class is not divided into cool and not cool but there is a single group. also the school is represented by the students when they wear uniforms. all looks the same and the whole school hold together. everybody can see which school it is.

But on the other hand school uniforms are not very helpful. you can not wear what you want and you can not have your own style. But this is very important at this age. students have to develop their own personalities. moreover you can not stop bullying. maybe it is reduced by school uniforms but you can never stop it forever. there are students who does not look good with them or they are bullied because of their behavior. in addition, bullying takes place in the free time of students. so outsider are only in school protected. above all it is very expensive. families have to buy these uniforms and they are not cheap. when you have more than one child, it becomes more expensive. after school most of the students wear normal clothes. so you have to buy both - school uniforms and clothes for the free time. everyone changes the outfit once per day. it is very expensive for poor families. maybe their children have to wear the uniform the whole day.

danke schonmal:)

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Englisch text über handys im unterricht

Stimmt das so? das was ich fett gemacht hab bei dem bin ich mir nicht sicher. Wäre super, wenn ihr mit Tipps geben könntet oder verbessert. Danke :))

On the most schools are cell phones not allowed. But many pupils ignore this. But the teachers hate the one and take away the cell phone. Here are a lot of pro and contra arguments. When the pupil needs help they can phones their parents. On the other hand the cell phones can ring in the period and these distract the other pupils to. I know the periods are often boring and messaging with friends is funny but you should be attentive to receive a good mark in a test. I think the teachers are right but I can´t live without my cell phone on/at school.

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Vorstellung von sich und Ausbildung in Englisch

Hi, habe bald eine mündliche Prüfung in Englisch in der wir uns am Anfang vorstellen sollen und unsere Ausbildung beschreiben sollen, habt ihr zu meinem Text Verbesserungsvorschläge?

Hello everybody. First of all I would like to introduce myself: My Name is xxx and I am 18 years old. I was born in xxx in 1993 and I live in xxx, that is near xxx. I have an older sister, her name is xxx and she is 21 years old. My hobbies are riding on horses and meeting my friends. At the moment I do an apprenticeship as a administrative professional salaried at the town xxx. Im at the first year of apprenticeship, which duration is 3 years. My tasks are very varied. In the course of my apprenticeship I go through all departments. For example, these are the regulatory office, building authority, tax office, registry office or head office. During my time in the individual departments, I visit the vocational school and courses once a year. My working hours are very varied, too. Twice a week I have at 12 o’clock end of work. Once a week only at 7pm. I have an 39 hour week. One of my tasks is writing a lot of letters to the citizien or business. Other big tasks are: - working out administrative provisions and decisions - implement decisions - records management - advice citizien - do organizational and administrative tasks - process operations in the budget and accounting process In my apprenticeship I was already in five departments. My colleagues are very friendly and solicitous to me.

Very important „book“ are the DVP’s. They contain all important legislations.

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Könnte jemand über meinen Essay drüber schauen?

         Every school should demand school uniform

In some countries all over the world school children have to wear uniforms the color scheme and style varies from school to school. In other countries pupils can wear to school what ever clothes they choose. In those countries it could be difficult to introduce school uniforms, because they are not traditionally used to wearing one. In the following essay I want to discuss the advantages to introduce school uniforms world wide.

In my opinion school uniforms ind schools are positive but negative too because not every student have the same style and they cant decide which school uniforms they wanted to wear.

School uniforms are on the one side good because a lot of children are victims of bullying because some of theme haven’t enough money to buy expensive and nice clothes. In this case the school uniform is very practically and maybe a good problem-solving.

On the other side pupils cant find our style and have to wear clothes that they don’t wanted. School uniforms can be nice but not every day ,It quickly becomes boring .However, there are people around the world for which it is too expensive ,always to buy a school uniform. Children grow fast and because of that they have to buy an again and again. We must take into account that the school uniform is maybe expensive but the clothes that the kids need for school is not cheaper and they have to be buy again and again, too.

On the other hand if the pupils wear school uniforms there is not a difference between rich and poor.

I have come to the conclusion that school uniforms are not everywhere positive and children should be able to develop their own style. Cause the bully is not reduced by a school uniform.

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