Englisch Story grammatikalisch richtig?
Ich lerne Grad für die Arbeit, und wir müssen auch eine Story schreiben. Ich habe 2 geschrieben ( sind vllt bisschen verrückt, aber ist nicht schlimm) zum lernen und möchte gerne wissen ob ich Rechtschreibfehler beinhalte und ob ich auch grammatikalisch richtig geschrieben habe. Siehe Bild schreibt mir bitte was falsch ist und welche Note ich eventuell dafür bekommen könnte:) hoffe ihr könnt das lesen 😂
Vielen vielen dank im vorraus ❤
It was Sunday I had to Babysitting at 9 o'clock so I put my clothes on and went to the family with the baby. I Rang and I heard a big cry it was the baby . so the mother open The door and said that she have to go to an important conversation . so she gave me the milk and the baby. The Baby stop crying but it don't wanted to drink the milk so it wanted to Growl . I took the baby on the ground and it went to the kitchen but I was with my phone and I don't saw it. The baby saw a Knife. I saw when the baby and i wanted to stop it but the baby was than laughing but not normal. it jumped on the ground and wanted to kill me . i ran out of the house and tried to went over the street but I fell down . The Baby came near and ran to me, to the street. I jumped out of the street but the baby was to slow and it was killed because of the car .
Das kleinschreiben nach dem Komma bitte nicht beachten.
It was a crazy Sunday . my mother said me that I have to buy two bottle milk for breakfast . so I took my jacket on and went outside . when I was outside i saw a Big Shadow on the ground , I look over me . It was a big Alien spaceship . All people screamed and I too. The door of the spaceship were opened and the aliens flew out of the Ship. I safed me behind a big house. The Aliens catched people and took them all in the spaceship. I saw so much blood, it was awful. An alien tried to find me but in the Moment i saw a Knife in the ground, so i took them and cut the head of the alien. The alien died but it cames more of them. One of them took my food and the other One my arms, i cried and screamed but then i woke up. It was all a Dream .
Bitte achtet auch nicht auf groß und klein Schreibung. Weiß wie das geht nur ich hab schnell geschrieben!
3 Antworten
Hab deine beiden Geschichten jetzt kurz überflogen. Es sind schon ein paar schlimme Fehler dabei. Der ersten Geschichte konnte ich zum Teil von der Logik her nicht ganz folgen. Das Baby war wohl eher ein Kleinkind (a toddler), da es schon laufen konnte. Ein bisschen wirr das Ganze.
It was a Sunday. I had to babysit at 9 o'clock. So I put on my clothes and went to the family with the baby. I rang and I heard a loud cry. It was the baby. The baby's mother opened the door and said that she had to go to an important meeting.
So she gave me the milk and the baby. The baby stopped crying, but didn't want to drink the milk. I put the baby onto the floor and it crawled to the kitchen. As I was occupied with my phone, I didn't pay attention. The baby saw a knife. When I wanted to stop the baby, it started laughing, but not in a normal way. It jumped up and down on the floor and wanted to kill me. I ran out of the house and tried to cross the street, but I fell to the ground. The baby came nearer and I jumped into the street. The baby was too slow and couldn't reach me, but it was knocked over by car .
It was a crazy Sunday . My mother told me to buy two bottles of milk for breakfast. So I put my jacket on and went outside. When I was outside, I saw a huge shadow on the ground. I looked up into the sky. There was a big alien spaceship .
All the people screamed and so did I. The doors of the spaceship were opened and the aliens came out of the ship. I hid behind a big house. The aliens caught many people and took them all with them into the spaceship. I saw so much blood. It was awful. An alien tried to get hold of me, but at that moment I saw a knife on the ground. So I took it and cut the alien's head off. The alien died, but more of them came near me. One of them took my foot and the other one my arms. I was crying and screaming, but then I woke up. It had just been a dream.
Jetzt verstehst du, warum ich es getippt haben wollte, oder?
Auf die Bildung des Past Tense (vor allem auch bei der Verneinung) musst du besonders achten.
Würd ja helfen aber bin schlecht in englisch
Kannst du die Bilder evtl drehen? Danke
Vielen, vielen dank das sie mir das ins richtige übersetzt haben