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Should teenagers be exposed to pets at their age?
Having a pet at a early age helps teenagers learn about responsibility and taking care of others. At the same time, it can help them learn to take care of themselves. Some teenagers though, should never have pets of their own if they can’t control themselves and have difficulty with empathy. Therefore: Should teenagers be exposed to pets at their age?
Teenagers mature at different rates. Some can handle the responsibility of caring for a pet already and others not. That’s why the age is for the parent to decide. If teenagers are animal-friendly, then cats make excellent pets. They can be playful and entertaining, especially if people adopt a kitten. They are also relatively easy to take care for: they just need good quality food, clean water, a clean litter box, toys and interaction with their owners for affection.
As mentioned, owning a pet helps in the development of a teenager for example learning to take responsibility for another life and experience what it means if someone depends on them. A pet also helps teenagers learning to give attention even if they are not in the mood for it.
Despite of that, how can teenagers even cover the costs of keeping a pet? Well, pets are expensive but for example could teenagers save enough money for example from their pocket money or allowance to cover the cost. Teenagers could also try to find volunteer opportunities in different places to work, which they can earn their own money.
To conclude, I would say teenagers should keep a pet, if they are ready to take care of it. If they care for their pet, they return the love. A pet doesn't question what kind of job the kid’s parents have or how much money they make, etc. They would love their owners if they get enough affection from them.
