Hallo,
ich habe einen Text in Englisch über meine besten Ferien geschrieben für die Schule und es wäre nett, wenn ihr mein Text durchgucken könnt und helfen könnt, da ich nicht sehr gut in Englisch bin. Danke im Voraus.
Hi Mike,
Thanks for writing back. Your holiday photos are fantastic.
My best holiday was in Dubai last year. It was amazing and the best holiday ever. I flew to Dubai with my parents and siblings. Every day we went swimming at the beach. Furthermore, we visited the city and went shopping. I bought many things, for example new red shoes and a new bag. In the evening we ate very good food at the resturant. I loved the food there! Moreover, we went to cinema together. The film was in english and I didn't understand all. We often ate ice cream together because it was very warm. We met lot of new people there. The most people are friendly and helpful. The best thing in dubai was the food. I really enjoyed my holiday.
Look forward to seeing you soon!
Best wishes