Hey, wir sollen in der Schule einen Brief schreiben ( letter to the editor) Ich hab einen geschrieben, jedoch weiß ich nicht, wie es mit der Grammatik aussieht. Kannst du mir helfen ? Flour 🌸
To the editor
i am writing to you in response to the article look up video: published on the website"www...", April 2015. The article which is about the poem "Look up" by Gary Turk was gorgeous and inspired me.
Nowadays the virtual communication is a very important topic in our society. After i wrote your aricle i thought about my life situation. I had many problems in my life, i was misunderstood and i lifed for my smart phone and laptop. But now i realised what goes wrong in my life. I never talk with people in real life only via networks. I come to the result to speak with other, go out and do much more with my family and friends. There are many different opinions of this poem video but i think that Gary Turk shows the result and issues of a extreme consuming of smart phones very well and it helps me to thing about my consuming life.
All in all, i am happy and thank you for sharing this article, otherwise i lifed the life that had befor.
Flour de la cour Street Nr. City