Wie kann man that-Sätze in Englisch vermeiden?

Kann ich z.b. anstatt: The problem is that the immigrants still are not able to speak english. The problem is the immigrants still not able to speak english. schreiben?

Und habt ihr allgemein noch paar Tipps, wie man that Sätze ersetzen kann ?

6 Antworten

xNeco

26.11.2015, 23:04

Du könntest schreiben:
Not speaking our Language is the Problems of the most immigrants.

Das ist dann allerdings kein besonders schöner stil. Bleib bei den that Sätzen

earnest

27.11.2015, 06:52

Das ist auch kein schöner und kein richtigerSatz:

-language

-problem

-immigrants (ohne "the")

ANTIxEra

26.11.2015, 22:57

Ja du kannst es so schreiben. Du musst aber an der stelle von "That" ein Komma setzen, damit hebst du es auf. Allerdings geht dies nur bei sätzen, wo that, who usw auf etwas bezogen sind. Wobei man who für personen verwendet und that für gegenstände oder tiere.

earnest

27.11.2015, 06:53

Nein, ein Komma wäre falsch.

ANTIxEra

27.11.2015, 16:44

@earnest

ich bin mir ziemlich sicher das man hauptsatz und nebensatz im deutschen sowohl als auch im englischen mit einem komma trennt, wenn keine konjunktion vorhanden ist. Ich würde es nicht schreiben, hätte ich es im englisch unterricht nicht gelernt. und hättest du meine antwort richtig gelesen, hättest du gesehen es ist das selbe was astrid geschrieben hat. Schönen tag noch.

earnest

28.11.2015, 13:26

@ANTIxEra

"Ziemlich sicher?" Dafür lehnst du dich aber sehr weit aus dem Fenster.

Du irrst. Dort gehört kein Komma hin. Und du brauchst hier gar nicht schnippisch zu werden.

Ciao.

AstridDerPu

Von gutefrage auf Grund seines Wissens auf einem Fachgebiet ausgezeichneter Nutzer

Englisch

27.11.2015, 06:07

Hallo,

nichts für ungut, aber nach der Korrektur deines Textes sind that-Sätze dein geringstes Problem.

The problem is (Komma) immigrants are still not able to speak English.

Du solltest dich nicht an einer Formulierung oder einem Wort aufhängen, sondern umformulieren. Dann fällt das Übersetzen nämlich meist leichter.

Darüber hinaus empfehle ich für das Vokabular ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z. B. pons.com und für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de - nach dem Motto Learning by doing!

Aber Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!

:-) AstridDerPu

earnest

Von gutefrage auf Grund seines Wissens auf einem Fachgebiet ausgezeichneter Nutzer

Englisch

27.11.2015, 06:54

Hinweis:

Bisher ist nur die Antwort von Astrid eine vollständig richtige Antwort.

Gruß, earnest

XXpokerface

26.11.2015, 22:57

Du kannst bei dem Satz das Wort einfach weglassen, den Aufbau so aber lassen.

Nabend,

In meiner (sehr kleinen) Familie kennt sich keiner mit 'English Grammar’ aus.
Naja, es ist jedenfalls ein Text auf Englisch, eine Seite lang. Brauche just Verbesserungsvorschläge und Kritik.

Danke danke 💀✨

alsoo:

Argumentative text

A statement that is often discussed by liguists is whether German similar to English serves as a lingua franca.

An argument in favor would be that German is spoken in many parts of the world. So overall 180 million people speak German worldwide. The german language is even in eleventh place among the most spoken languages in the world.

Furthermore, German is the most spoken language in europe. For example in Austria, Swisse, Namibia and parts of the Netherlands.

And moreover, it is closely related to other languages which makes it easier to learn. Swedish, Norwegian and Danish are often mentioned as examples.

In order to come to a balanced conclusion, I will now explain the other point of view.

At first, English is used much more often as an official language than German. Especially in Africa, as these countries were former colonies. There are many countries whose universities teach in english. In Germany, for example, around 600 courses are taught exlusively in english.

Secondly, German itsself is a language which is very hard to learn because of the grammar. And in comparison, English is much easier to understand and learn. So other countries do not educate their pupils German at school which is another disadvantage.

Last but not least, German is mainly spoken in countries which are close to each other. But it is less spoken in countries that are further away.

Personally, I am more convinced by the contra side. I believe that English is best suited as a lingua franca. Of course, German is also in some way a lingua franca but I do not think that it serves as such similar to English. Therefore it would be also contraproductive to classify German as the new official communication level.

...zur Frage

könnt ihr mein Comment in english bewerten?

wir sollten ein comment über dieses vid https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fiu9GSOmt8E schreiben aber ich bin mir nicht wirklich sicher was ich noch dazu schreiben soll

Comment:

Plastics

In the video Plastics: Last Week Tonight with John Oliver (HBO) John Oliver explains how plastics are harming the planet, why recycling isn’t the solution, and why fixing the problem will be up to not just consumers, but corporations and policymakers.

Only less than nine percent of plastic that is being made gets recycled. That isn’t the because people don’t recycle its just that most things we think are recyclable aren’t That means the plastic ends up as landfill, gets burned or ends up in the ocean. Even worse is that companies that sell these plastics are making adds that push this idea that we (The Consumers) are to blame.

I agree with everything John Oliver has said. I think that the root of the problem are really the corporations because for them maximizing profit is everything. They know what they are doing is harming many people but still they procced to do it. In any case, I think the solution is to strictly ban single-use plastic packaging and introduce EPR laws to every country, but this sadly seems unrealistic. Even if we had the ban we still have to deal with the already existing plastic waste

...zur Frage

Cartoon analysis?

MESSAGE:

The painter of the cartoon is making clear that the people in the picture are immigrants from different countrys, which you can notice by their looks and they are all learning english in a classroom which you can also see by the poster on the upper left corner. The author of the cartoon makes also clear that there are many people from different country‘s where english is spoken in their own way of talking. There are so many accents, slang words which can make it difficult to understand a person from another country. The uncomfortable athmosphere and the confused looks of the people in the picture symoblizes that they all can‘t understand each other. The boy who is holding a poster is a example for the different accents of english. He is from Glasgow and his english is incomprehensible for the teacher and that‘s the reason why he is assigned to the course.

kann man hier noch was wichtiges dazu schreiben?

und könnt ihr mich bitte verbessern?

danke schön!

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Written Discussion "Would you like to live in Mumbai". Könnte mir jmand die Discussion verbessern?

Könntet ihr den Text verbessern ?. Ich shreib morgen ne Arbeit und ich find den nicht so gut und würde mich auf ein Feedback freuen.

**Today I am writing about the question „would you like to live in Mumbai?”. I think it´s a good question, because there a many Arguments for and against.

My first Argument for living in Mumbai is, that if you speak English, you can manage everything in the city. It is not necessary to speak the regional language. For example, …. Second argument is that India is one of few countries, where even people can have a maid or a chauffeur. You are able to afford them. In addition you can send your child to school. Because there are German, American and English schools. Another Argument for is that Mumbai is a city for shopaholics. There are designer closets much cheaper than in Germany. The qualities from the Materials are good. Tough the crime rate is high, so you can robbed in the city. The city has good transport options, for instance local trains, metro, monorail and public transport buses. No other city can sustain this much population and traffic. Nevertheless is there the rush hour. The Streets are crowded and it tooks a long time to come to the destination. My last argument is that the food in Mumbai is very delicious. You can eat in small restaurants, on the street or in very good restaurants to try out different cuisines. However you have to pay attention with food.

To sum up, the people in the city are very friendly and they will help you every time, when you need. I think I would like to live in Mumbai It´s a fascinating city with colorful festivals. **

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Würdet ihr für mein comment eine eins geben?

Ich bin mir halt nicht sicher, ob mein comment in Fach Englisch mir gelungen ist, daher wäre ein Feedback nett :)

Many people argue whether or not the British monarchy should be abolished.

In the following, I present arguments for and against a monarchy so that you can form your own pinion.

On the one hand, the British monarchy should be abolished because a monarch only rules but has no real political power or function. this means that a queen or king is unnecessary and unimportant to the state.

Also, the UK is not a democracy, as is claimed, because in a democracy people can elect the head of state, but since the royal family is still alive, they will continue to be the head of state.

This is very unfair and unequal to the rest of the population.

Also, people can never be 100% sure if the next monarch is good for the state and does not have bad intentions.

This could make people very worried.

Another important aspect is that the royal family spends a lot of money on the palace when they could use the money for more important things.

On the other hand, the British monarchy should not be abolished, because a monarch is very important even if he or she has no real political power.

His or her importance is reflected in national stability.

Since a monarch embodies the British history, values and tradition, this leads to stronger national identification, which brings people closer together so that there is national stability.

In addition, members of the royal family are very important to charities, because since the royal family has a good image and is important, charities can be heard better, so they continue with their charities.

Some people may think that a monarch spends a lot of money, but that doesn't mean a president doesn't.

there are many presidents with many

There are also many presidents with many offices, even more than the British monarch.

The fact that the royal family has always been at the head of the state means that people trust it because they know its good intentions.

This means that the monarchy is in safe hands, so to speak.

Another important point is that the royal family has shown that it can modernize and adapt to the times.

This is very important because many people claim that they are unmodern and have different thoughts than today.

But the Queen, for example, has allowed her son Charles to marry a divorced woman, whereas in the past this was a very dangerous issue.

that means she was able to “modernise”.

Weighing the pros and cons of the British monarchy, one can say that it should not be abolished because the British monarchy has been very successful, mainly because it has adapted to the times and modernized.

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wer kennt sich von euch in english gut aus .?

Könnt ihr bitte meinen Txt durchlesen und wenn ihr einen Fehler findet es mir sagen. Ich bedanke mich für eure Hilfe und bedanke mich im Voraus

Nowadays there are many discussions about school uniforms. In the following comment I will discuss advantages and disadvantages about school uniforms. The main argument is, that uniforms are good for the school because wearing them stops violence and helps to develope a sense of pride in the students. The contra argument is, that uniforms cost a lot of money and are not always suitable for the weather. These are not the only reasons that students have to worry about. They would need to buy additional clothing to wear after school and that would be really expensive. From my point of view the pro argument is really convincing, because the bullies can´t bully another student, because they wear the same uniforms. Moreover, I think that this is a point which is really important for all of us. Additionally, a powerful argument is that they don´t need to think about how to dress in the morning. It's my opinion that uniforms are helpful because the students respect each other.

...zur Frage

Was könnte ich in dem Aufsatz ,,My dream job" noch schreiben?

Hallo leute, ich habe einen Aufsatz auf englisch geschrieben der über mein Traumberuf handelt. Ich muss 15 Sätze haben aber ich habe nur 11 Sätze. Kann mir jemand helfen noch 4 Sätze dazu zuschreiben? Ich bin übrigens 14 und habe sicher irgendwo fehler in dem Text!

My dream job:

I'd like to become a primary school teacher. There are postitive and negative aspects in the job. The job is well paid and you have breaks during the lessons. The good thing about the job is that it is not dangerous at work. One thing else is that you have long summer holidays. You don't work on the weekend and you have fixed working hours, however, the job has also negative aspects. The bad thing about this job is that you have stress and that you have to have patient. In the class are sometimes disrespectful pupils and they don't listent to you. That's why it may be that there is noise in the class. At home you have to control the homework of the pupils and have stress because you have to work quickly. A big problem for me is to get up early. But if you want to become that job, you will get used to it.

Ich weiß da sind Fehler drinnen aber ich bin kein Profi! Kann mir also bitte jemand helfen noch 4 Sätze zu schreiben?

Danke an die Leute die das durchgelesen haben und mir antworten :)

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Englisch-test-klausur überprüfen?

Hallo ich habe im Anhang die Aufgabenstellung und meine Bearbeitung einer Klausur gestellt. ich würde mich freuen wenn sich jemand die zeit nehmen würde diese zu korrigieren und mir Tipps zu geben wie ich mich verbessern kann.

Exam

1) Summary

The article “The impact of Cyberbullying on Youth Lives” published by Sue Scheff on the Huffpost is about children who get bullied on the Internet and the impact caused by this on their lives.

Recently there was a survey about how social media impact the lives of people in the age from 13 to 24. According to that a lot of teens have experienced bullying on the internet but most of them haven’t told their parents or other reference persons. The study also said that Instagram and Snapchat are the most popular social sites for people under 25. Although Twitter and Facebook are still popular, they are slowly drifting away from the mainstream and are mostly used by adults. Many of the teens who experienced sextortion or cyberbullying are sharing less information’s on social media than before. Social media companies are also fighting against for example revenge porn. The poll also showed that most of the cyber bullying is send in text messages and not from strangers. Most of the victims are saying that the fault is on the social media platforms and that they should change something. In the end the text is asking if it is not the time that we all change our social media behavior to something better and less cruel.

2) Cartoon Analysis

The cartoon titled “Cyber bullies” by Dave Granlund published on davegranlund.com shows an aggressive dog with the word Cyber Bullies written on him and a feared helpless dog on his computer monitor. The aggressive dog stands for cyber bullies who are always bully other people for no reason on the internet and the small dog is standing for the bullied. The massage of this text is very similar to the text because it is also against cyberbullying. The difference is that it isn’t saying the message directly, it just takes that picture and shows us what cyberbullying is.

3) Comment

The discussion about who should change something about cyberbullying on social media, the users, or the platforms themselves. But who’s fault, is it?

To begin with the first argument is that social media websites are not the ones saying/typing those messages so they should stop doing that for a better climate on the web. Also, it should be considered that the companies have the responsibility that their side should be clean and not full of hate. Another powerful argument is that it would be a lot easier to install filters that recognize harmful texts or videos than bring every single one of the users to being nice.

In conclusion you can say both sides should change something. The users should be more pleasant and not that aggressive, but you cannot trust on that completely so the social media companies should add some better filters and more moderators to ban that behavior from the internet.

...zur Frage

Englisch Aufsatz überprüfen, weiß nicht ob es richtig is

Hallo ihr lieben, Ich saß jetzt eine weile an diesem Text für Englisch und es wäre echt nett von euch wenn jemand von euch da mal drüber gucken könnte? (Das Thema zu löschen wegen 'Nicht sehbarer Eigenleistung finde ich nicht so toll.. :( )

Immigration to the US from 1892 to the present

The US is a friendly country for immigrants! The Liberty of Immigrants and Native Americans are very important for the Population. Since 1892 till 1959 entered only through Ellis Island in NYC twelve million people to the USA. Overall entered more than 12 million immigrants the USA. The reasons to immigrant in another country are usually hunger, thirst and religious or politics persecution. That was an awful time for the Immigrants! They must leaved her homes to went to an unknown Place. Since 1892 entered ca. 5 million Germans to the USA, so they was the biggest Immigrant group from one country. Today the laws for US-Immigration are stricter. Assistance to illegal Immigration in the USA is now penal too. A Lots of Americans are against this law. The Center of Immigration in the USA was Ellis Island, that is today a famous museum for Immigration.

...zur Frage

Passt der Englische Text?

In the poem ‚,The Schoolboy‘‘ by William Blake, you get a clear message that the schoolboy doesn’t enjoy the school and its system at all, so the question that arises is ,,What could school do, to be more enjoyable for the schoolboy and students like me?‘‘

First of all many students have to wake up early in the morning, which isn’t a perfect start into the day. Furthermore they mostly can’t enjoy the morning even if they like to stand up early, because they must get finished quickly for school. To counteract this problem, it would be a good start to begin with school less early and to approach the day more calmly. So to remove the effect of a prison it’s important to produce a more peaceful environment for everyone, to make the classrooms more comfortable and even integrate some outdoors schoollessons in spring and summer, so that the pupils have more joy in learning and are able to concentrate more because of the fresh air and the nature. Last but not least we schoolboys anf schoolgirls should be allowed to have more own thoughts and to be able to control them and not just being forced to memorize things, which won’t be even important for our adulthood.

I also think that the last point which is beinh made here, is a fact which the author want to draw attention to, because it’s a mostly international problem that should has to change as we are not robots.

(Also mit dem letzten Teil bin ich eher unzufrieden weil so oft which drankommt)

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Kommt in diesem Satz ein Komma dazu oder sogar weg? (englisch)

Basically, the reason why I picked the film called “Crossing Over” is that it’s representing the dangers and problems the immigrants are confronted with in the United States very well and of course the brutality of the U.S. Government in relation to the illegal immigrants

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Könnte jemand über meinen Essay drüber schauen?

         Every school should demand school uniform

In some countries all over the world school children have to wear uniforms the color scheme and style varies from school to school. In other countries pupils can wear to school what ever clothes they choose. In those countries it could be difficult to introduce school uniforms, because they are not traditionally used to wearing one. In the following essay I want to discuss the advantages to introduce school uniforms world wide.

In my opinion school uniforms ind schools are positive but negative too because not every student have the same style and they cant decide which school uniforms they wanted to wear.

School uniforms are on the one side good because a lot of children are victims of bullying because some of theme haven’t enough money to buy expensive and nice clothes. In this case the school uniform is very practically and maybe a good problem-solving.

On the other side pupils cant find our style and have to wear clothes that they don’t wanted. School uniforms can be nice but not every day ,It quickly becomes boring .However, there are people around the world for which it is too expensive ,always to buy a school uniform. Children grow fast and because of that they have to buy an again and again. We must take into account that the school uniform is maybe expensive but the clothes that the kids need for school is not cheaper and they have to be buy again and again, too.

On the other hand if the pupils wear school uniforms there is not a difference between rich and poor.

I have come to the conclusion that school uniforms are not everywhere positive and children should be able to develop their own style. Cause the bully is not reduced by a school uniform.

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Ist das richtiges Englisch?

Hey,

I think we all know this statement. Until today, however, we have not seen a single flying car. This means that I would like to make it clear that all models and ideas that I will present to you today will not be found 100% in the future. All these are only thoughts or better said a dream of the people later such progress to be able to see.

...zur Frage

Kann man das 'that are' weglassen?

They are often prepared to do jobs that are not wanted by other people. Kann ich das 'that are" in diesem Satz weglassen? Wir müssen diesen Satz neu mit participle constructions schreiben.

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