Hilfe englisch Text wichtig kann jemand bitte mal drüber lesen?
Hallo, es geht bei mir um eine wichtige Note, könnte jemand mal kurz drüber schauen? Vielen lieben Dank im Voraus.
going out to eat with business partners from other cultures.
in many cultures around the world business lunches take place in a restaurant or hotel. In countries with high temperatures dinner often starts late for example around ten or eleven o’clock in the evening. In many countries caution is advised when ordering meat dishes for example especially pork as even the sight or smell could be considered offensive or insulting by some guests.
For this reason, it’s recommended that only dishes that can be clearly identified are served at an international business buffet in Europe. So don’t serve dishes such as stew or casseroles where you can’t recognize and distinguish the ingredients. Vegetarians or vegans could be confused. Similarly sweet flavors in meat dishes or salads make some guests uncomfortable. They are welcome to offer wine. Don’t pour the wine until it is specifically requested so as not to embarrass guests who don’t drink alcohol for variety of reasons.
vielen vielen Dank!!!!
2 Antworten
Ich weiß nicht, was ihr für Regeln in der Schule habt, aber in meiner Schule waren Abkürzungen tabu. Deshalb würde ich die Wörter lieber ausschreiben.
Ich persönlich würde Passiv-Formen vermeiden.
Du schreibst sehr "deutsch". Das sieht man daran, dass deine Sätze sehr "noun-heavy" sind. Englisch ist aber "verb-heavy'.
Ich würde bei einem Aufsatz keinen Satz mit "so" anfangen. Verwende stattdessen "thus" oder "therefore". Das Komma nach diesen Wörtern nicht vergessen! Mögliche Kommas solltest du allgemein noch einmal überarbeiten.
"For example especially pork" klingt komisch. Zum Beispiel besonders... Das ist ja irgendwie doppelt gemoppelt. Benutze eines von beiden Wörtern. "Zum Beispiel Schweinefleisch.." vs. "Besonders Schweinefleisch.."
"They are welcome to offer wine"
Wer ist "they"?
Hallo :)
Bin auch nicht super im Englischen, hab aber kleine Fehler gefunden :)
Going out to eat with business partners from other cultures.
In many cultures around the world business lunches take place in a restaurant or hotel. In countries with high temperatures' dinner often starts late for example around ten or eleven o’clock in the evening. In many countries caution is advised when ordering meat dishes for example especially pork as even the sight or smell could be considered offensive or insulting by some guests.
For this reason, it is recommended that only dishes that can be clearly identified are served at an international business buffet in Europe. So do not serve dishes such as stew or casseroles where you can’t recognize and distinguish the ingredients. Vegetarians or vegans could be confused. Similarly, sweet flavors in meat dishes or salads make some guests uncomfortable. They are welcome to offer wine. Don’t pour the wine until it is specifically requested so as not to embarrass guests who don’t drink alcohol for variety of reasons.
Viel Glück 🍀