Hallo, könnt ihr den Text vielleicht korrigieren ? Brauche da wirklich Hilfe. Wäre super nett ! Freue mich über jede Korrektur und Anregung !:)
Why people become murderers
I will write about why people become murderers and commit a serious crime. Every year investigators in Germany detect about 1000 murders. This means that more than three people per day die an unnatural death here in Germany - the number of unreported cases is even higher: Many homicides, such as suffocation or overdose of medication, go unnoticed and appear in any statistics. An idea that makes you shudder. The evil is under and between us, so we defend ourselves so much against it. It is a delusion to draw a line between themselves and offenders, because evil belongs to the humans.
Murder and manslaughter scare, but crime is not only on television to many a huge fascination. And the question always arises: How can a person be capable of such atrocities? Only in very few cases are mentally disturbed persons committing bad offenses. Appraisals about murderers, rapists and killers testify: Most perpetrators have the choice of whether or not they commit an act - often it is the accident that decides whether or not someone actually gets involved. There are acts that do not take place because at the right moment an important football game is on TV.
Although there are simply bad people and deeds that inevitably happen, these cases are the exceptions. Most people are not completely angry. Why some people then transcend borders, become murderers or rapists remains mysterious and uncanny for all of us. There are no simple explanations of how such deeds occur.