Ich schreibe morgen eine Arbeit und würde gerne wissen was ich verbessern kann und ob meine Argumentation überhaupt gut ist. ( ehrliche Meinung ist gefragt)
what do you think about the Internet ?
It's a fact that everybody today have internet on the phone, the Computer or the Tv.
First it's good when you have Internet, becaurse you can read newspaper, look for information, talk and write with friends.
Second you can chat with another people from a another country and than you can learn or improve your language.A example is that I often talk with my exchange student to speak better english.
Another argument against is today are some people very mean and than you have a socialy network people can write everythink what they want, becaurse some people are very sad with bad comments.
Another argument is that everyone can see what you do, who you friends are and personal data for example your phone number...
My opinion is that internet is good, because people with a Handicap can write or comunicateion with another peoples with the Same Handicap or can write with normaly peoples.
Ich danke schonmal im Voraus für die Verbesserung und für die ehrliche Kritik. 😁