Nen dich detail :D

...zur Antwort
Ich brauche hilfe kann das jemand korrigieren und tipps geben?

Ich bin schlecht in englisch und habe das geschrieben um meine note aufzubessern. Es muss perfekt sein. Kann mir vllt einer ein paar fehler sagen?

Homelessness in California

Homelessnes is a very big problen in the USA and espacially in California. About 137000 people in California were homeless in 2013, this is a quater of all homeless people in the USA. That is 0,23 percent of californians population. If you want to compare it with germany, in germany are about 24000 people homeless and thats only 0,03 percent of the population.

California has a warm clima and good wather so many homeless people move to the big cities of California. Most of the Homeless people in Califirnia are in downtown, south L.A., Hollywood, Venice and Santa Monica. The problem are the very high rates in the big Cities, so for normal worker its hard to find an apartment that they can pay for. An other aspect for Homelessness are the illigal imigrants. If they didnt find a job they havent any money and have to life on the street.

A lot of peopel like to help, for example: Gregory Kloen, he is an artist from Oaklend someday he researced for a new book about homeless people an their take covers from garbage. He was exited about, so he built the first "Homeless Home". it became on break on the wheel from old shopping carts built and the windows he has built from old Washing machienedoors. it lastes one week to built it. since them he often build "Homeless Homes" and gives it away to homeless people.

...zum Beitrag

Zb. Bei that is 0,23...muss hin this is 0,23....

...zur Antwort

Geh am besten auf die seite englischhilfen. Denn da wird es sehr gut erklärt und es gibt zu jeder zeitform eine übung

...zur Antwort

Ich würde schon sagen dass, das kranke leute sind weil sowas macht man nicht. Das ist ja sowas wie folter. Ich würde mit ihr zu einem anderen therapeut gehen.

...zur Antwort