Berufsschule, einen Aufsatz über sein Betrieb auf Englisch verfassen. Geht das so in Ordnung?

Ich muss in der Berufsschule einen Aufsatz auf englisch über unserern Bertieb verfassen, und möchte euch um Rat bitten, ob man das so lassen kann.

Original Text auf deutsch.

Ich bin bei der Tekola TK GmbH in Herten als Kaufmann für Büromanagement eingestellt. Unsere Firma wurde 1997 gegründet und besteht mit mir zusammen aus 7 Mitarbeitern. Zwei Auszubildende und 5 Angestellte die hauptsächlich Mobilfunktarife, Datentarife (Zum Beispiel Surfstick) und Festnetztarife verkaufen. Wir fungieren hierbei als Vermittler für O2, Telekom und Vodafone. Wir betreuen Bestandskund beraten diese, in allem was mit DSL und Mobilfunkverträgen zu tun hat, werben Neukunden, und führen gegebenenfalls auch Vertragsverlängerungen für Mobilfunk- und DSL Tarife durch. Unser Fokus liegt hierbei hauptsächlich bei Selbständigen

Und hier die englische Version

I am apprentice as an office clerk at Tekola TK GmbH in Herten. The Company was founded 1997 and consists of 7 employees. 2 Trainee and 5 employees who mainly sells mobile rates, data rates (for example surf sticks) and
fixed network tariffs. We act primarily as an intermediary for O2, Telekom and Vodafone. We advise existing customers, attract new customers, and perform contract extensions for mobile tariffs and DSL tariffs. Our focus is especially of selling and consulting for the self-employed

Was mein ihr? Kann man es so lassen?

1 Antwort

ConiCool

03.11.2015, 10:23

Über die Länge kann ich nicht urteilen, da ich nicht weiß, was genau gefordert wurde.
Bei "2 Trainee" hast Du ein "s" am Ende vergessen.
Im gleichen Satz schreibst Du "who mainly sells". Falls Du schreiben willst, dass die Firma diese Dinge verkauft, musst Du das anders schreiben, Z.B.: "It is a company which sells...". Willst Du schreiben, dass die Angestellten das tun, muss das "s" bei "sells" weg.
Im letzten Satz muss nach "focus is especially" ein "on" statt ein "of" stehen.

An sich finde ich die kurze Unternehmensbeschreibung ganz gut formuliert.

Hello,

good Morning. My name ist ... ... and I would like to Tell you something about my favourite Shop today.

Real was established near Düsseldorf in Germany with 10 employees and many grocery Produce in 1992. What you think how many employees now work. Now work in the firm employees over 1500 staff in your all branch and have over 1.000.000 Produce what they sell.

Real is my favourite shop, because they have good Produce and nice employees. I buy in Real often Berliner and other produce.

The special of Real is they can find it overall.

Thank you for the listing. This is the end of my Prasentation.

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Englisch Aufsatz okay?

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Leute habe mein Betriebssystem gelöscht nachdem ich ein bisschen im boot system gepfuscht habe.

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Intel UNDI, PXE-2.0 (build 083)

For Artheros PCIE Ethernet Controller v2.1.1.1(12/23/11)

Check cable connection!

PXE-MOF: Exiting Intel PXE ROM.

No bootable device — insert boot disk and press any key

Was soll ich jetzt tun ich hab keine Ahnung

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Das ist frei erfunden was die Adressen usw angeht.

                                                       March 5, 2014

Max Muster Musterstraße 44 12345 Musterhausen Tel.: 01234/56789 Email: musterMax@abc.co.uk

Jennifer O`Rourke Automotive Services Ltd 103 Selsdown Drive London E14 9LA UK(United Kingdom)

Dear Ms Jennifer O´Rourke,

Application for a bilingual assistant

I saw your advertisement for a bilingual assistant on the website of www.unitedKINGdom.co.uk and I should like to apply for this position.

From 2004 to 2009 I attended Mustergesamtschule in Musterhausen comparable to comprehensive school, where I obtained my A-Levels. I successfully did a traineeship for a secretary with the company MusterBoat GmbH, which is a small and modern company that produce boats and export them.

Since 2009 I have been working with MusterBoat GmbH as the secretary. During my traineeship with MusterBoat GmbH I gained experience in talking English or German with customers and running a busy office. This traineeship gave me considerable skills which I want to use and improve for the position advertised.

I have a good command of English. I had nearly 8 years of English at school and I have also done a special examination for commercial professions. After completing my traineeship I was able to improve my command of English by speaking directly to the customers. I also have had French for 5 years in school, that gives me the opportunity that I´m able to speak the three languages, needed for the bilingual assistant.

I enclose my CV and certified translations of my certificates. I should be pleased to provide names of the referees if required.

I should be grateful if you would consider my application. I would very much enjoy the challenge of working for a company in London.

Yours sincerely

Max Muster

Enclosures

Ich hoffe ihr könnt mir ein paar konstruktive Antworten liefern.

MfG Cataracs

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MySQL Datenbank verweigert den Zugriff, wie löse ich das Problem?

Tach liebe Community,

ich habe basierend auf PHP ein Loginscript geschrieben, allerdings hat dieses keine Zugriffsrechte auf meine Datenbank, die ich bei Nitrado hoste.

Beim Aufrufen des Scripts im Browser, erhalte ich folgende Fehlermeldung:

Deprecated: mysql_connect(): The mysql extension is 
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Wie löse ich das Problem? Leider bin ich was MySQL nicht so sehr fit, daher bitte ich um Hilfe!

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Grüße

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Hallo,

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Many Greetings

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Kann jemand mir bei diesem Computerproblem helfen?

Was ist das und wie kann ich es beheben:

Ich habe ein Acer aspire 7750G mit windows7 Auf dem Bildschirm erscheint:

For Athoros PCIE Ethernet Controller v2.0.2.3(03/31/10)

Check cable connection! PXE-MOF: Exiting Intel PXE ROM. No bootable device--insert boot disc and press any key

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Englisch Summary, Text 2

Hey Community,

ich weiß nicht ob ich das überhaupt darf oder ob die Frage hier jetzt gelöscht wird, weil ich ein zweiten Text wiederholt als Frage stelle.

Ich hatte schon vorhin ein Text hier aufgestellt damit ich meine Fehler verbessern kann, was ich jetzt wiederholt mit den zweiten Text mache.

Ich hab hier versucht die Fehler zu verbessern, die ich bei dem anderen Text hatte, naja ich habs versucht sag ich mal.

Hier der Text:

The text " Girls fight for their rights" written by an unknown Autor and published in the year 1997, deals with a girl who fights for her rights, to get the respect from the boys and to accept her as a girl doing the sport wrestle.

Ashley Moore,18 years old, is a wrestle girl who fights against boys. At first she gets discriminated by people,because she is the only one girl who fights against boys. A boy from her schools biggest rival challenges her to fight against him.First she gets bullied and disrespected, but she dont listens to the jokes about her. After she wins the fight after a couple of minutes, the boys starts to respect her and the bullies and jokes about her stops. She got the equality for what she fights hard.

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Könnt ihr mir bitte in Englisch Helfen bitte?

Hiii, bitte kontrolliert mein Text, bitte Korrigiert die Grammatik und Rechtschreibfehler bittee dirngendd:???

Welcome to my presentation. Today I'm talking about the self-employed entrepreneur.

I would like to be a self-employed entrepreneur because self-employment ends unemployment, it achieved a higher income. You can make time independent and you get the previous social environment can leave.

The independent entrepreneur makes his own business decisions. He is responsible for everything in the company. He bears the financial risk.

 I am well suited for this job because I am a team player, creative, flexible and responsible.

 I am motivated to become an independent entrepreneur because I want to be my own boss and develop and implement my own ideas and concepts.

 To start my own I would see what kind of “company” it is, then I would find the right legal form. I would go further, find a suitable company name. Then I would look how much money I have and create a business plan.

 My future hopes when I have my own company are that my company will be known worldwide, that I have a lot of employees, that I have a turnover of 5 million euros and that I can sell many products. My fears are that I will go broke and that I will not be known.

I'm also afraid that I don't produce a lot of products and that I don't have nice employees.

 The qualifications are ambition, willingness to work, willingness to take risks, Resilience, Creativity, Sense of responsibility, required.

 The advantages of being independent are that you can determine yourself, you can realize yourself, you have more freedom, you have no conflicts with superiors. Furthermore, you have higher work motivation because you work for yourself. The chance to live out your own calling. The chance to make more money than an employee.

 The disadvantage of independent is that You work an above-average amount of work. If the order situation is bad, there is no regular salary. You take a higher financial risk, depending on the type of business.

Bitte hilft mir Leute dringendd??

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Ist das gut auf englisch geschrieben? Aufsatz/Präsentation? Könnt ihr mich bitte verbessern wenn etwas nicht richtig geschrieben ist?

Hello dear class today I present you a presentation free time activities with the client. Here is my contents. at the first I tell you about my client – general. then I check up is my client fit for the activities. I did an interview with Mr. T and I present you my question and her answer from the interview. Next I ask the class two question About clients and activities. then I talk about activity in the zoo and swimming pool. I show you the locality at the zoo and swimming pool. Then comes my activity goals with Mr. T. Subsequently comes my preparation on the day of the excursion. emergency situation and now. what is my client looking for? can I have a video for you. to the end comes my sources.

Here is the avatar of my client. he is 1 meter 70 high and he weighed 70 kilograms And he likes to wear colorful clothes. he carries caps and jeans and sport shoes. Mr. T comes from Romania and he spoke good German. On the last time said His parents Mr. T is too overweight and the employee don’t give him fast food and drinks with caffeine. The crazy on this Situation is: the parents gifts him food from McDonald's and pizzastation and that’s its ok when he makes after food one hour sports. he was in Romania on the Christmas holiday and now he weighted 95kilogram. Parents said Mr. T don't watch TV when he doesn’t make sports. Mr. T likes sports football, swimming and running on the city.

Ready for the activities? before the activities starts I asked my client: are you motivated and when he said no I motivated him. is it a good day for the activity with the question is he physical resilient? Then I check the clothes is suitable for the weather? Then I notice the documents were the emergency informations.

These are the goals I want to promote with this activity with Mr. T

promotion for movement

promotion for social contacts

strengthening of her confidence

One the day of the destination I will control the emergency medications. Has Mr.T a cell phone included and enough to drink and eat.

In Emergency Situation gives rules and 4 of them are call the 911, I calm the client when he is in panic, I help him with first aid or hole people they can help him. The last point is inform the supervisor and the residential home of NRD

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Englisch Essay: Kann jemand bitte darüber schauen, würde mich sehr freuen?

Essay: Pet and Teenagers

Should teenagers be exposed to pets at their age?

Having a pet at a early age helps teenagers learn about responsibility and taking care of others. At the same time, it can help them learn to take care of themselves. Some teenagers though, should never have pets of their own if they can’t control themselves and have difficulty with empathy. Therefore: Should teenagers be exposed to pets at their age?

Teenagers mature at different rates. Some can handle the responsibility of caring for a pet already and others not. That’s why the age is for the parent to decide. If teenagers are animal-friendly, then cats make excellent pets. They can be playful and entertaining, especially if people adopt a kitten. They are also relatively easy to take care for: good quality food, clean water, a clean litter box, toys and interaction with their owners for affection.

As mentioned, owning a pet helps in the development of a teenager for example learning to take responsibility for another life and experience what it means if someone depends on them. A pet also helps teenagers learning to give attention even if they are not in the mood for it.

Despite of that, how can teenagers even cover the costs of keeping a pet? Well, pets are expensive but if teenagers have a pet, they can buy cheap food or cheap toys, if they want to cover their costs. Teenagers can also spend their pocket money more for their pet or can earn some money in holidays.

To conclude, I would say teenagers should keep a pet, if they are ready to take care of it. If they care for their pet, they return the love. A pet doesn't question what kind of job the kid’s parents have or how much money they make, etc. They would love their owners if they show affection to it.

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