Ist diese summary okey?
Es kann sein, dass der Text eine komplett Katastrophe ist. Ich war schon immer sehr schlecht in englisch. Ich hoffe trotzdem, dass es oke ist.
In the chapter ten days after from the novel "Looking for Alaska", written by John Green and published in 2005 deals with Alaskas funeral.
In the first part of the chapter Miles wakes up and takes a shower. Then the Colonel and Miles dress up for Alaskas funeral. Miles, Lara, the Colonel drives with Takumi in his car to Alsaka‘s hometown where the funeral is. The other students drive with buses. On the their way Lara and Takumi laught about a funny memory of Alaska. When Miles starts to think about her, he gets sad and begins to cry. When they arrives a man shows them the room where Alaska‘s coffin is. Miles realizes how much he misses Alaska. In the last part the friends group spend their last time with the dead Alaska together.
All in all the friends group visit Alaska at her hometown to say goodbye for a last time.
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(----) chapter ten days after from the novel "Looking for Alaska", written by John Green and published in 2005 (Komma) deals with Alaskas (Grammatik) funeral.
In the first part of the chapter (Komma) Miles wakes up and takes a shower. Then the Colonel and Miles dress up for Alaskas (Grammatik) funeral. Miles, Lara (kein Komma sondern Konjunktion) the Colonel drives (Grammatik) with Takumi in his car (Ausdruck) to Alsaka‘s hometown where the funeral is. The other students drive with (Ausdruck) buses. On (---) their way (Komma) Lara and Takumi laught (Grammatik, RS) about a funny memory of Alaska. When Miles starts to think about her, he gets sad and begins to cry. When they arrives (Grammatik) (Komma) a man shows them the room where Alaska‘s coffin is. Miles realizes how much he misses Alaska. In the last part (Komma) the friends (Grammatik) group spend their last time with the dead Alaska together. (Grammatik, Satzbau, Formulierung)
All in all (Komma) the friends (Grammatik) group visit (Grammatik) Alaska at her hometown to say goodbye for a (Wort) last time.
Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,
für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de - und Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!
:-) AstridDerPu
When they arrive ohne s glaube ich. Und ja der klingt okay. Darf ich dich fragen in welchem Bundesland du zur Schule gehst? Wir lesen nämlich gerade genau das gleiche Buch.
