Englisch, Social Media?
Aufgabe „Tell about your Owen consumption of Media“
Kann mir jemanden vielleicht bei meinem Text weiterhelfen und meine Fehler verbessern?
und gibt es etwas, was ihr hinzufügen würdet
Danke im Voraus!😊
„I am certain that a lot of people in my age do not read Newspaper, listen to radio or watch tv to get the news and information they want to. For example, I have to admit that I only listen to radio if I am bored in the car and I do not watch Tv unless I have to. I prefer my mobile phone to get new Information as the other teenagers at my age. The main reason for this is, that you can search up things whenever you want to and do not have to wait till the Information is given to you in the Tv or radio. Another point is, that I am not really a big reader, I rather like it when I get the News as soon as possible. The Exchanges with other people in social media can be very good and messages get spread quickly“
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Tell about your Owen (RS) consumption of Media“
„I am certain that a lot of people (ohne Präposition oder at) my age do not read Newspaper (RS), listen to (Hier fehlt der bestimmte Artikel.) radio or watch tv (RS) to get the news and information they want to. For example, I have to admit that I only listen to (Hier fehlt der bestimmte Artikel.) radio if I am bored in the car (Hier würde ich umformulieren.) and I do not watch Tv (RS) unless I have to. I prefer my mobile phone to get new Information (RS) as (Wort) (---) other teenagers (---) my age. The main reason for this is (kein Komma) that you can search (---) things whenever you want to and do not have to wait till the Information (RS) is given to you in (Präposition) (---) Tv (RS) or radio. Another point is (kein Komma) that I am not really a big reader, I rather like it when I (besser: like to) get the News (RS) as soon as possible. The Exchanges (RS) with other people in (Präposition) social media can be very good and messages get spread quickly Punkt“
Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,
für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de - und Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!
:-) AstridDerPu
