Describe cartoon?

Hallo, also zur Zeit machen wir in Englisch das Thema Südafrika und wir haben diesen Comic bekommen und den müssen wir beschreiben ich hab einen Text geschrieben kann jemand mir das bitte für mich korrigieren und mir Tipps geben.

Mein Text:

In the picture I see an elephant who is sitting on an old white men. His head is red, next to him is a gun. The elephant is looking angry and has a lot of energy. On the elephants foot is a crown. There are some symbols above his head : A flash, a cloud, and a spiral. The cloud means to sing about something, the flash is Energy or fury and the spiral means movement. I think the cartoon is about a man who wanted to shoot the elephant. But is elephant is stronger and for him it is easy to win. He is the winner and gets the crown. With this cartoon I think the artist want to say that animals are strong and sometimes dangerous, when you do things they hate.The cartoon shows the power that African peoples have. The elephant seems to be the African nation. The Africans want to get the crown Back from the white old man. He is white, that means Europeans. I think the cartoon wants to say the Africans are angry and want to have the same rights are as the white people.

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unknown0312

16.09.2021, 19:08

In the cartoon one can see an elephant that is sitting next to a white old man. The color of his head is red. It is being held at gunpoint. The elephant's facial expression emphasizes its anger and shows that it is full of energy. On top of one of the elephant's feet one can see a crown.

Den Rest kann ich nicht korrigieren, da ich nicht verstehe, wie genau du das meinst und weil ich die Karikatur nicht kenne.

SosoEinhorn2020

16.09.2021, 18:26

1. Zeile 2: wen meinst du mit him

2. Dein Text ist super! Und du hast fast keine Fehler! Nur 1 Sache: sag bitte nicht so oft him. Das ist nicht richtig. Sonst alles nice! Eine A- :)

unknown0312

16.09.2021, 18:38

Also ich sehe da einige Fehler 🧐

Hagar490

Fragesteller

16.09.2021, 18:51

@unknown0312

Wäre sehr nett ,wenn sie mir meine Fehler verbessern.

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