Bewerbungsschreiben Englisch Schule

hier ist mein covering letter könnten sie mal einen blick drauf werfen und Verbesserungsvorschläge und Fehler korrigieren

                                meine Adresse

Adresse Bewebung

Application for a position as au pair Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to apply for a position as au pair, as advertised on your website.Please find attached a copy of my CV. Why am I applying for an job as au pair in England? I am currently in year 9.Next autumn there is an oppurtunity from my school of going abroad for 1 year and I dont want to miss that chance so i want to improve my language further and gaining during that time practical experience.My 5-years-old brother has given me experience of dealing with childrens(childcare).I consider myself a suitable candidate for this position because I am an enthusiastic worker and I am able to manage organizational tasks independently.I expect that u want me to do tasks like washing the dishes, cleaning the house, cooking for the childrens,get the children ready for school and bring them to bed which also includes my responsibilities. There is one downside in your advert ,the driving licence.I dont have a driving licence because I am allowed to drive independently as recently I am 18 years-old.But to get along with that i can take the public transportation

I would welcome the opportunity to discuss the job vacancy with you at an interview. I can be contacted by E-mail (see details at the top of the letter).

Yours sincerely

Enclosed: CV

5 Antworten

Alexa0126

16.12.2013, 17:05

Why am I applying for an job as au pair in England? => Den Satz weglassen, ist überflüssig.
I am currently in year 9. => Hier fehlt die Info, wie lange die Schule noch geht (year 9 of 13 years, of 10 years. Der Schultyp (also Gymnasium oder Realschule oder Hauptschule) ist nicht so wichtig, weil damit die Briten eh nix anfangen können. Wichtig wäre noch die Information, wie viele Jahre du schon Englisch lernst (I have been learning Englisch for X years).
Next autumn there is an oppurtunity from my school of going abroad for 1 year => The school offers the opportunity of spending one year abroad in year 10. I would like to take that chance to improve my English.
and gaining during that time practical experience.My 5-years-old brother has given me experience of dealing with childrens(childcare) => I already have lots of experience in child care as I have I 5-year-old brother. I know how to change diapers and taking care of a little child as I have done this many times with him.
I expect that u want me to do tasks ike washing the dishes, cleaning the house, cooking for the childrens,get the children ready for school and bring them to bed which also includes my responsibilities.=> you, nicht u! => I know also how to manage a household as I have to help my mother a lot with washing the dishes, cleaning the house and cooking.
I dont have a driving licence because I am allowed to drive independently as recently I am 18 years-old => der Satz gibt irgendwie keinen Sinn. Wenn Du gerade 18 geworden bist (recently I am 18) dann darfst Du doch Autofahren?

Den Führerschein verlangt die Familie wahrscheinlich eher, weil Du die Kinder irgendwohin bringen musst (Fußballtraining, Musikunterricht).

Mir fehlt in dem Brief noch ein bisschen das Interesse für Kinder, also ein Satz, dass Du Dich zB immer gerne und mit großer Begeisterung um Deinen Bruder gekümmert hast oder so. Die Familie vertraut dir immerhin ihre Kinder an, dann sollte man nicht so ein sachliches Verhältnis zu Kindern haben ;-) Der letzte Satz "welcome the opportunity..." fällt auch in die Kategorie "sehr sachlich". Vielleicht besser was mit "looking forward to getting to know your family and the children personally".

Chunges

Fragesteller

16.12.2013, 17:45

Der letzte Satz welcome the opportunity den Satz habe ich genommen da wir in der Schule ein Job Interview machen also der Job ist nicht real jedoch klingt Ihre version besser und persönlicher

der Satz mit

I already have lots of experience in child care as I have 5-year-old brother. I know how to change diapers and taking care of a little child as I have done this many times with him.

da wollte ich soetwas wie
I already have lots of experience in child care as I have 5-year-old brother. I know how to change diapers and taking care of a little child as I have done this many times with him. I am pleased of being surrounded by kids (der satz hört sich glaube ich nicht korrekt an ^^) angenommen der satz ist richtig an welche stelle soll ich den schreiben?

Führerschein:

in der jobanzeige sind die requirements unter anderem international driving licence

deshalb wollte ich soetwas schreiben wie :

Ich habe keinen Führerschein da man bei uns in Deutschland erst erlaubt ist alleine mit 18 jahren zu fahren however to get along with that i can take the public transportation

sonstiges: ich habe jetz einen absatz beim übergang vom ...take that chance to improve my English. zu "I already have lots of experience...

wo sollte ich sonst noch absätze machen abgesehen von dem obrigen teil ( betreff , anrede ,woher man von der stelle gehört hat ?

Chunges

Fragesteller

16.12.2013, 18:34

@Chunges

in der anzeige steht auch das man nicht raucher ist wie soll ich das in meinen letter integrieren

Chunges

Fragesteller

16.12.2013, 18:34

@Chunges

in der anzeige steht auch das man nicht raucher ist wie soll ich das in meinen letter integrieren

Alexa0126

17.12.2013, 12:13

@Chunges

Ein bisschen was musst Du auch selbst machen.

Chunges

Fragesteller

16.12.2013, 17:46

Application for a position as au pair

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to apply for a position as au pair, as advertised on your website.Please find attached a copy of my CV.

I am currently in year 9 I have been learning English for 5 years.The school offers the opportunity of spending one year abroad in year 10. I would like to take that chance to improve my English. I already have lots of experience in child care as I have 5-year-old brother. I know how to change diapers and taking care of a little child as I have done this many times with him. I know also how to manage a household as I have to help my mother a lot with washing the dishes, cleaning the house and cooking.I consider myself a suitable candidate for this position because I am an enthusiastic worker and I am able to manage organizational tasks independently

nenee

16.12.2013, 18:08

Worum geht es hier eigentlich?

Du bist maximal gerade 17 geworden, gehst noch zur Schule, Ueberschrift ist ebenfalls Bewerbung "englische Schule" und du willst dich als Au Pair bewerben? Hat deine Schule dem zugestimmt?

Geh davon aus, wenn die Familie einen Fuehrerschein fordert, dass sie ihre Gruende dafuer hat. Es geht nicht um dich und ob du gewillt bist, oeffentliche Verkehrsmittel zu benutzen, sondern es geht um den Transport der Kinder von A nach B oder Einkaeufe zu taetigen.

Chunges

Fragesteller

16.12.2013, 18:33

es geht um ein job-interview wir müssen einen covering letter mit cv vorher abgeben job anzeige ist vorgegeben aber nicht real

nenee

16.12.2013, 19:31

@Chunges

Ahhh,..ok :-) ..........also Hausaufgaben

01Ronja01

16.12.2013, 16:42

Ich finde den ganz gut o: :))

Chunges

16.12.2013, 16:48

ich sehe gerade dass durch copy&paste die Absätze nicht übernommen worden sind ingoriert dies es kommt mir lediglich auf den Inhalt und den Ausdruck an

lenanesthaken

22.02.2016, 10:18

Ich hab hier auch ein Beispiel auf http://www.designlebenslauf.de/bewerbung-auf-englisch/ gefunden.

Hallo meine Lieben! Ich muss am Mittwoch eine mündliche prüfung über das thema zukunft wie auch bewerbung machen. nun muss ich einen two minute talk über das thema my road ahead machen und wollte wissen was ihr so von dem haltet und ob ihr verbesserungsvorschläge habt :)

Today I’d like to talk about my road ahead so I will tell you, how I’m looking toward to my future. I’ve chosen this topic because, in my opinion, it’s important to think about this and to get clear what I really want to reach and how I imagine my future. I’d like to divide my talk into 4 parts and now, in my first part I want to take a look at my left school time so I will tell you what I want to reach in the left 3 and a half years of school. In this time, I want to get good marks respectively plenty of points during my A-Level with the aspiration getting a lot of acceptances for study places, what brings me very quickly to my second part, where I want you to tell something about my study period, so for example where I want to live during this time. I’m looking forward studying marketing management as a dual study in Düsseldorf because I’m interested in this field of publicity. I decided to live in Düsseldorf because I love this city and the other reason is that I’m near to my family. Then, with a good friend, I decide to live together in a flat share because it isn’t as much as expensive if you’re living in a big flat alone. After my study time I want to work as a marketing manager what brings me to my third part where I want you to tell something about my work aims and how I imagine my hopefully job. As a marketing manager you have to know how to sell products like shoes, dresses or cars and you have to make these products attractive for the costumers. All in all you can say about this job, that you have to promote for different kinds of products. It is important to mention, that I want to live abroad in big cities, let me give you some examples, like Paris or New York City because I’m in love with them. I expect from the job that it is a diversity and also creative job. And my last point is about my personal aims, so if I want to get a family or for example an animal. And this both questions I can answer with the statement yes, because it is my biggest dream getting a family with an attractive man next to me and two children, equal if this will be boys, girls or both. I also want to get a little teacup pig because they’re very cute. I’d like to finish my presentation by summarizing that I want to be a successful worker and a good mum with a lot of aims and that I want to live abroad. That brings me to the end of my presentation, thanks for listening.

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Korrektur Englisch?

Hallo Leute,

wäre nett wenn einer mir meinem Text korrigieren könnte!🙃

Hi folks,

I went on a camping holiday in Bavaria with my family. As you probably know from my other posts, I don't really like going camping. But I had no choice but to go with my family! To be honest, I enjoyed it a bit! I'm sure you're wondering now, but seriously, it wasn't as bad as the last few times. I mean, of course the weather was mostly bad but otherwise I had a good time. And this time I wasn't alone - I met other teenagers and spent a lot of time with them! We talked about a lot of topics such as celebrities, football and au pairs. And my blog post today will mainly be about au pairs. To be more specific about male au pairs ... you heard it right! Most of you would surely say that there are only female au pairs! Because the teenagers I met on vacation didn't want to believe me either! But no, there really are male au pairs! Maybe not too many like female au pairs but there are some! The main purpose of this post is to make it clear to all of you that no profession has a label. It means that everyone can do anything, no matter if you are a male or a female! And another reason is because I want to draw attention to male au pairs! I want to encourage many guys among you to do something like this too.Last week I read a testimonial from a German boy named Timo. He had written about his time as an au pair in New Zealand. After graduating from high school, he decided to go to a distant country as an au pair. He too was initially unsure whether he would even have a chance as a boy. Nevertheless, he did not give up his hope and after a month a host family contacted him. He lived in Waikato with his host parents and host brother. His main job was to take care of their 4 year old son. In addition, he was also responsible for the household. He had to look after the pets and clean the whole house one day a week. All in all, he felt very much at home in New Zealand, his host brother became like his own brother and he had a lot of fun going to play parks with him, building caves, jumping on trampolines and teaching him to write and play the piano. He enjoyed this trip so much that he would be willing to do it all over again! So don't wait boys and girls! If you have such an opportunity I would definitely use it to have an unforgettable experience! Please let me know your opinion on this au pair topic! Thanks for reading and see you on another post! Good night:)

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Englisch Hausi Bewerbung

Hallo. Ich muss in englisch eine bewerbung für ein platz als au-pair mädchen schreiben. währe nett wenn ihr rechtschreibfehler, grammattikfehler, verbesserungsforschläge geben könntet.

Personal statement

I love to explore new places, meeting new people and to learn something about other cultures. I never stayed at Australia before, so I wanted to visit it. I think it`s a good way to become a more independent person and to improve my English. It’s also a good chance to learn something about the live in this country, because later you can visit it as an tourist, but you can´t live like an Australian. In my childhood, we heaved some Au- Pairs and so I wanted to test it also.

Qualifications/Skills

Language skills German native speaker, learn English since 2004, some French

Work experience

2009 to 2010 Volunteer work: helping by the child gymnastics

2011 to date Volunteer work: helping by the church for children

2009 to date Regular job: helping children to learn, to make their homework (1-4 hours per week)

2011 to 2012 Regular job: delivering magazines by bike (2 hours per week)

Hobbies and interests

I love doing sport like gymnastics, jogging,… I also like to reed, hear to music and play the guitar. I find it very nice to help other children for example doing with them their homework,…

References

Available on request

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Englischer Lebenslauf?

Wir sollen in Englisch einen Lebenslauf (CV genannt) schreiben und ich wollte nach Rechtschreibfehlern, Grammatikfehlern und anderen verbesserungen für folgende Abschnitte fragen:

Objective:

I want to make the world to a better place and no matter how difficult it will be, I will even work harder for my goals.

Skills:

I am educated in design, technogie, humanity. I recognize personal behavioral sturctures, the separation between unetic and etic, the goal that is being pursued withe the kosequenzes as well as the context. I analysis with structure and details, so can find out information successfull. I value respectful speech with other persons high. I have a large vocabulary with that I can articulate percise. I am able to comunicate complex ideas. I work effectiv in teams and as a solo. Organize difficult task and multi-tasking are easy for me. Managing and prioritize duties are no problem for me. Oten I have genius Ides with that I can find fabulus solucions. I can handle technical services.

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Aufsatz über mich-Englisch ;-)

Ich möchte gerne in england ein Internat besuchen. Virraussetztungen dafür ist aber ein selbstgeschriebener Aufsatz über mich - auf englisch! BITTE BERRICHTIGEN& ERGÄNZEN!!!!!!!!!!!! Mein Text: This Letter Should give you an insight in my life & personality: First I want to introduce myself: My name is....I live in a small town near....,called...with my parents & my sister...(4) & my brother...(12). My father works as.......my family is very important for me& we have a really good relationship. Other important persons in my life, are my friends. I spend all my free time with them. Except; i am doing other hobbies: I like to play tennis & sometimes the piano.therefore, i would be happy, if I could continue my hobbies in England. I often have heard,that in English schools, there are Orchestras and other musical and sporting activities.if that should not be so, it would not be that bad, because I have more positiv reasons to vistit an English school: I would like to learn English very well, I would like to make new contacts & think, I will gain very funny experience l. And, of coarse,because my annoying sisters!:-) at the moment I go to the......school. After the holidays, I will visit grade 9. But maybe, I will be in an Englisch school. In Grade 7 I chose French as my second language.

...zur Frage

Wie findet ihr meinen Songtext (meinung)?

Bitte spart euch die Kommentare wegen der Kommasetzung! Ich schreibe mein Texte immer so auf wie ich sie ausspreche würde bz setzte immer ein komma vor, wenn man eine Kurze Pause macht bevor man das andere ausspricht! Also egal please keine Kommentare. Nur meinung.

Why i can’t be the one that you never let go, so i’ll stay forever by your side. One day, one love, one world, you and me. Tell me that you also think so and i just say

Mhhh mhhhh mhhh, i was to blind for your love and to realise, that you didn’t want the same, as i do. You’ll never look at me now, and i frozed. Please take me to a place, that you want to be with me, but you aren’t with me. Because you are there with another one.

My love, my words, i never lied to you. I never did thing that i regret it. So we never we never, get another chance, oh, to love us forever in this world and i just say

And you broke, broke my heart so much, and i can’t believeeeeeeee, that you didn’t feel the same, as i do. My loveeee was so real. But you didn’t feel the same, as i do. Please give me back, all the love, i’ve gave ya the year.

...zur Frage

Englisch, Social Media?

Aufgabe „Tell about your Owen consumption of Media“

Kann mir jemanden vielleicht bei meinem Text weiterhelfen und meine Fehler verbessern?
und gibt es etwas, was ihr hinzufügen würdet

Danke im Voraus!😊

„I am certain that a lot of people in my age do not read Newspaper, listen to radio or watch tv to get the news and information they want to. For example, I have to admit that I only listen to radio if I am bored in the car and I do not watch Tv unless I have to. I prefer my mobile phone to get new Information as the other teenagers at my age. The main reason for this is, that you can search up things whenever you want to and do not have to wait till the Information is given to you in the Tv or radio. Another point is, that I am not really a big reader, I rather like it when I get the News as soon as possible. The Exchanges with other people in social media can be very good and messages get spread quickly“

...zur Frage

Gastfamilien Brief, ich mache 22/23 ein Auslandsjahr in den USA und würde gerne wissen ob ich Fehler in meinem Brief habe oder irgendwas neu schreiben sollte?

Dear future host family. First of all, I would like to thank you for reading my letter and giving me the opportunity to live in the USA for ten months and being part of your Family.

Now I would like to introduce myself. My name is xxx, xxx for short, and I am xx years old (turning xx in February)

I am living in xxx with my Family which consists of my mum, my sister, my brother and our dog Cooper. I love animals but unfortunately, I am allergic to cats and can’t live with them.

My parents are divorced. My dad lives about 15 minutes away from me with the car, and I also have a big sister, but she is old enough to live on her own. I have a really good relationship to my family, and we all get along pretty well. We try to spend as much time as possibly together, at Holidays, the weekends or on a walk with our dog.

I found some new friends in my new school, and I really like them, they are all extremely different with their personality and looks but at the end they are the kindest people that I have met so far, and I am so grateful for having them. I am already sad thinking about leaving them here in my home country, but they know that it’s my dream to live in the USA for 10 months and they are also excited for me.

I am attending the ninth schoolyear (Highschool). The focus of the school is technology and architecture. I need to take the train to get to the school and also the bus. My grades are good and its easy for me to learn new things, but I am also really clumsy, and I talk a lot and fast, but when I meet someone for the first time, I am really shy but as soon as they get to know me, I talk more.

I am spending my free time at the lake or going on bike rides. I am not doing any sports, but I would love to try something new in the USA, like Track & Field or Cheerleading. Some of my hobbies are swimming, biking, traveling and reading. I love to read. I try to read as many books as I can but it’s difficult because of all the schoolwork. I also love to bake and cook.

My Family and I are often in Italy especially in the summer holidays, my aunt loves to go there and most of the time we are going with her, we are all really close and help each other if we need anything.

I am helping my mum to keep the House clean. I am doing chores like vacuuming, doing the dishes or taking out the trash. We don’t have a chores plan (e.g., who does this chore on this day...) but if my mum asks me to do anything I will do it for her.

My dream is to become an Interior designer and work abroad, and after my graduation I would like to travel the world or be an Au pair in the USA, Australia or Canada.

I am hoping that I can bring you my culture, language and my Country closer by cooking you my favorite dish and teaching you some words in my mother tongue.

The reason why I want to go to the USA is not just to improve my English but to get to know the culture and eating habits and just to see if it really is like in the Movies.

der Rest ist in den Kommentaren.

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Englisch Prüfung 10 Klasse (Hilfe)?

Könnte bitte jemand über meinen Text rüber schauen :)?

Muss auf 2-5 Minuten kommen

Hi, my name is Felix, iam 15 years old and i live with my family in a small town, called x in germany.

Its really nice here,It's quiet and it's nice to live here with your family, but sometimes im sad too, i would like to live in a big city like berlin where you can go shopping or where are thousands of restaurants.

Overall its nice here.

But lets get back to me and my family, in my family there is my little sister x , and my mom and dad.

In my free time i like it to go outside with my friends or to drive to the nearest town, x.

If im not outside with my friends i often go to the gym, like 4 times per week and to be honest, im really proud of myself that I'm going through with it and I hope I will continue to do it.

After my 10th class i will start my apprenticeship as a chemical and i’m really thankful for that, because i will earn enough money and i won’t be longer dependent on my parents. I will save the half of the money and spend the rest on clothes and other things.

I would like to invest half of the money that i’m going to safe and use it to build up a business so that I can be self-employed when I am about 20 years old.

One of my big goals is to be self-employed so that i can organize my working hours be myself and have more time for myself and my family

About a year ago i founded a fashion brand with a friend and we really wanted to do it, we even went to the town hall and registered a business

But unfortunately it didn't worked because we didn't have enough money for that, after my training we want to try it again

Iam really good about social media and have a great experience in this field, and i’m always learning english with it

Thank you for taking the time to get to know me a little better.

...zur Frage

Englisch Bewerbungsschreiben?

Hey Leute, ich schreibe morgen eine Arbeit in Englisch und wollte mal wissen was ihr von der Bewerbung haltet, was ich verbessern sollte,usw.

Das ist frei erfunden was die Adressen usw angeht.

                                                       March 5, 2014

Max Muster Musterstraße 44 12345 Musterhausen Tel.: 01234/56789 Email: musterMax@abc.co.uk

Jennifer O`Rourke Automotive Services Ltd 103 Selsdown Drive London E14 9LA UK(United Kingdom)

Dear Ms Jennifer O´Rourke,

Application for a bilingual assistant

I saw your advertisement for a bilingual assistant on the website of www.unitedKINGdom.co.uk and I should like to apply for this position.

From 2004 to 2009 I attended Mustergesamtschule in Musterhausen comparable to comprehensive school, where I obtained my A-Levels. I successfully did a traineeship for a secretary with the company MusterBoat GmbH, which is a small and modern company that produce boats and export them.

Since 2009 I have been working with MusterBoat GmbH as the secretary. During my traineeship with MusterBoat GmbH I gained experience in talking English or German with customers and running a busy office. This traineeship gave me considerable skills which I want to use and improve for the position advertised.

I have a good command of English. I had nearly 8 years of English at school and I have also done a special examination for commercial professions. After completing my traineeship I was able to improve my command of English by speaking directly to the customers. I also have had French for 5 years in school, that gives me the opportunity that I´m able to speak the three languages, needed for the bilingual assistant.

I enclose my CV and certified translations of my certificates. I should be pleased to provide names of the referees if required.

I should be grateful if you would consider my application. I would very much enjoy the challenge of working for a company in London.

Yours sincerely

Max Muster

Enclosures

Ich hoffe ihr könnt mir ein paar konstruktive Antworten liefern.

MfG Cataracs

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Könnt ihr mir bitte in Englisch Helfen bitte?

Hiii, bitte kontrolliert mein Text, bitte Korrigiert die Grammatik und Rechtschreibfehler bittee dirngendd:???

Welcome to my presentation. Today I'm talking about the self-employed entrepreneur.

I would like to be a self-employed entrepreneur because self-employment ends unemployment, it achieved a higher income. You can make time independent and you get the previous social environment can leave.

The independent entrepreneur makes his own business decisions. He is responsible for everything in the company. He bears the financial risk.

 I am well suited for this job because I am a team player, creative, flexible and responsible.

 I am motivated to become an independent entrepreneur because I want to be my own boss and develop and implement my own ideas and concepts.

 To start my own I would see what kind of “company” it is, then I would find the right legal form. I would go further, find a suitable company name. Then I would look how much money I have and create a business plan.

 My future hopes when I have my own company are that my company will be known worldwide, that I have a lot of employees, that I have a turnover of 5 million euros and that I can sell many products. My fears are that I will go broke and that I will not be known.

I'm also afraid that I don't produce a lot of products and that I don't have nice employees.

 The qualifications are ambition, willingness to work, willingness to take risks, Resilience, Creativity, Sense of responsibility, required.

 The advantages of being independent are that you can determine yourself, you can realize yourself, you have more freedom, you have no conflicts with superiors. Furthermore, you have higher work motivation because you work for yourself. The chance to live out your own calling. The chance to make more money than an employee.

 The disadvantage of independent is that You work an above-average amount of work. If the order situation is bad, there is no regular salary. You take a higher financial risk, depending on the type of business.

Bitte hilft mir Leute dringendd??

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Englisch - Kommentar kontrollieren?

Nowadays, many people believe that people have to start their own family, included a husband or a wife and children. But is that right? In the following comment, I will present my opinion of Will's attitude towards family life.

My first argument is that children enable parents to become grandparents. Otherwise it isn‘t possible to become a grandma or grandpa. If these grandchildren then also decide to breed, parents have the chance to become great-grandparents.

Besides that you share your whole life with one another. The other helps you in difficult life situations and is always available with advice and action. For example, you don't have to deal with problems alone because you always have someone who help and listen.

Above all you put your own flesh and blood into the world. Children are the only thing that has genes or DNA. You can see it grow up and how it becomes more and more independent. Children also give you a lot of love in return, which can also be expressed in the form of gratitude. For example, the children take care of them when the parents are older and can no longer do things independently.

In conclusion, I disagree with Will's statement. In my opinion, children are great and can make you very happy. I also think that a partnership or marriage strengthens a person because you always have someone by your side. All in all, I think that when starting a family there are only positive aspects.

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Ist dieser Text richtig geschrieben auf Englisch?

Hallo. Ich würde gerne wissen ob die Rechtschreibung und Grammatik richtig ist auf Englisch?

Text:

"She is my mother and I'm her son. She trusts me in every way. She wants to make the trip more comfortable for me. We live together. She wants to give me a safety for the trip to the UK. She will be happy, if I go to my favourite country. She knows that I love the UK. Me and my mother know that I will not spend the whole money (2000) for my trip. I state, that I've planned to spend 1000.00 CHF for my trip. So the rest is just a enormous safety and care from my mother."

Danke euch und liebe Grüsse ;)

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Motivationsschreiben Auslandssemester

Hallo!

Werkle gerade an meinem Motivationsschreiben für mein Auslandsemsester. Könnt ihr mir vllt. sagen, ob das, was ich bereits habe, so halbwegs in Ordnung ist? Das wäre toll!

LG pechmarie7

*"Dear Sir or Madam!

My name is ..... and I am writing to apply for a place as an ERASMUS exchange student at the University of Aberdeen,which is one of UK's most internationally distinguished universities. The purpose of this letter is to present myself and the reasons why I am applying precisely for this university. Additionally I will explain why I would like to study a semester abroad as well as to provide further background information in support of my application. I am 21 years old and I have been studying English and History to become a teacher for two and half years now. I decided to study English as I have always been fascinated with the language. I first encountered English at the age of ten in grammar school and since then my excitement for this language has increased from day to day. I always knew that working with other people, especially children, was my vocation and therefore I decided to become a teacher in the abovementioned subjects. I think spending abroad makes a teacher much more genuine as far as pronunciation and also cultural competence are concerned. Language and culture are in my opinion always interconnected. To me it is simply not possibly to study a language without being interested in the cultures where this language is spoken. Therefore I really long to spend a semester abroad in Aberdeen. I am applying for the University of Aberdeen only because I think the Aberdeen University offers me to combine my personal aims with my academic improvement. I am fascinated with the geographical distinctiveness and landscape of Scotland as well as with its culture and history. As my second is History and Aberdeen is providing a wide range of history courses I know that this university is the right choice for me as I can integrate these courses into my curriculum perfectly. Furthermore, this would be a great opportunity to improve my pronunciation and speaking skills. I know that I still have deficiencies concerning pronunciation and as I am going to be a teacher I have to acquire this skill in order to teach my pupils pronunciation in an accurate way. In addition, I think through my experiences during my time abroad… I am looking forward to facing the challenges of living in a foreign country and to gaining cross-cultural competence. Staying abroad for a longer period of time will open to you a whole different view on a country and its culture.

I would consider myself as open-minded and extroverted. I am having no difficulties in getting in touch with others and would use this opportunity to extend my social network. You are able to see the world from a different angle if you get to know different cultures and countries and this will offer you new approaches in life. etc. pp "*

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