Habe heute einen text gelsen über mendel von meiner freundin. In dem sind einige fehler drinne aber ich bin nicht gut im korriegierne. Also meine Frage ob das jemand machen könnte. Hier der Text:
Gregor Mendel was a German-speaking Silesian scientist and Augustinian friar who gained posthumous fame as the founder of the modern science of genetics. He was one of that brilliant researcher, to the thinking of her time far ahead were.
Mendel was born into an ethnic German family in Heinzendorf bei Odrau. And had one older sister, Veronika, and one younger, Theresia. During his childhood, Mendel worked as a gardener and studied beekeeping Later, as a young man, he attended gymnasium in Opava. He had to take four months off during his gymnasium studies due to illness. From 1840 to 1843, he studied practical and theoretical philosophy and physics at the University of Olomouc Faculty of Philosophy, taking another year off because of illness. He also struggled financially to pay for his studies and Theresia gave him her dowry. Mendel became a friar because it enabled him to obtain an education without having to pay for it himself and thought that monastery was the best place for him to study without worrying about how he’d finance his studies. He became a priest in 1847. (He was given the name Gregor when he joined the Augustinian friars) After four years he went to University of Vienna where he studied physics, chemistry, botany and physics. When he returned to the monastery after completing his studies, he took a position as a teacher of natural sciences at the Technical School at Brünn.