In the Novel “Speak” written by Laurie Halse Anderson in 1999. The character “Mr. Freeman” is an art teacher at Merryweather High. He is the art teacher of the main character Melinda and is introduced in one of the first chapters.
Mr. Freeman is a teacher who is described as ugly. Furthermore, he has a “Big old grasshopper body, like a stilt-walking circus guy and an nose like a credit card …” p.14, l.9 f., . He also appears to be very scary to other people, but he seems to have a nice smile on his face (p. 14, l.11 & p. 14, l.21 ff.).
Another important fact is his use of language(p.14 l.12 ff.)which makes the students want to listen to him
During the novel Mr. Freeman is a supporter of Melinda and they sometimes talk about Melindas problems. He sees the feelings in the drawings in Melinda's work (p.66-67). Besides Mr. Freeman is very creative and he wants others to also be creative (p. 15 – 16). Moreover he wants to motivate the students to make something special. On p.14 l. 11 you can see that Mr. Freeman “smiles”. There you can conclude that he is a very friendly person
Mr. Freeman is a different person. He is not like normal teachers and he has his own vision of school, lessons and priorities (p. 14 – 15). His ideas are very scary but he has a plan for the rest of the schoolyear (p. 15, ll.20 ff. & p.16, ll.1 ff.) .
He has a good friendship with his students, which you can see by him hugging his students(p.196 l.10 ff.). The last day of school Melinda stays longer than needed so that she could finally put the finishing touches to her painting. Afterwards she starts crying in the class with Mr.Freeman and he says "You've been through a lot haven't you?"(p.197 l.24 f.), that shows that he actually cares about Melinda and what she has been through. In other words he has a good connection to Melinda.
In conclusion, Mr. Freeman is the art teacher of Melinda, who has a good connection to Melinda, and he seems to be a friendly teacher, who goes motivated motivates his students.
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