Korrektur meines Englischtextes
Hallo an alle, die die englische Sprache gut beherrschen. Ich muss einen Text über die Unterschiede zwischen Indien und Europa schreiben. Da mein Englisch nicht soooo gut ist, würde ich mich über Korrekturvorschläge freuen. Schönen Abend noch
The text Letter from a Land of Paradoxesfrom Vibha Surana deals with the differenses between India and the West-European countrys.
The first point is family. In India the parents are dominant and the kids have to follow them. The families in Europe are not so hierarchlly like in India. The next point are animals. Indish people thinks that animals have the same rights like human. So their are not handle them like we handle our pets. Furthermore, the religions are difference too. India have a lot of relegions and so many goods. In Europe are three main religions with only one good. My last point are the languages. Every European country has a mother tongue like England has english and Germany has german. In contrast, India has more than one languages which were spoken in the land. (komischer Satz oder?)
Finally, there are a lot of differences between India and the West but there are similarities too. Both areas lies on the coast and have a beautiful culture.
Ich hoffe, dass der Text einigermaßen geht. MfG
