Ist diese englische Bewerbung korrekt?
Ich möchte mich für ein Praktikum in einem englischen Kindergarten bewerben. Ist die so fehlerfrei? Und gibt es Stellen, die ich anders besser ausdrücken könnte?
I would like to apply for a practice in ... Next month I will presumably pass the Abitur at the ...gymnasium in .... Since I am looking forward to work as an Au Pair in Scotland for half a year in 2013, and maybe as a primary school teacher, I would like to gain experience at your kindergarten. My preferred period would be from ..., however I am very flexible. During the last years, I made two practices in a kindergarten in ... and a practice at a meeting point for young people with social problems in .... I have learned English sine 3th grade, furthermore I took part in a bilingual English class since 7th grade. Should you have any questions, please feel free to call me. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Danke schonmal :)