Jimmy Fallon gefällt mir auch garnicht. Jedoch gibt es auch Jimmy Kimmel, den ich persönlich sehr lustig finde. :)

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Hallo, sieht alles gut aus, jedoch würde ich schreiben I look forward to hearing from you. Also kein (.) dazwischen.

LG

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Hallo,

ich scheibe dir mal einige Sachen auf, die ich ändern würde:

The author thinks that many people have the wrong expectations about an exchange

I have found a good article about some reasons why to become an exchange student on the internet

The author knows a lot about himself now...

An exchange year for people who just want to make party...

Yours (name)

Ich hoffe, dass ich nichts übersehen habe. Dein Text ist insgesamt echt gut geworden.

LG

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Englisch Text kontrollieren?

Kann mir jemand das kontrollieren??? Ich hab das schnell geschrieben.. und kann ich noch was hinzufügen? Oder besser schreiben

Es geht darum:

  • Where do you see yourself in the year 2050? How will climate change affect you in your personal life?
  • What does your daily life look like in 2050? Where do you live? What is your daily routine?
  • What actions are you ready to take on? What would you be ready to do?
  • How would the world in 2050 be different from today?

Dear friend, 

I haven't heard from you in a long time. I am writing you this letter and I hope you are well. How are you and how are you living? Tell me something about you.. 

To be honest, life has changed a lot, and it's not exactly positive. The temperatures are rising and it is very warm where I live. Climate change is a really big problem. In the past, nobody really cared about it, it was a topic that I didn't deal with. I was never affected by it. Nevertheless, life was beautiful back then and I can still remember our moments together.  We lived our moments and we didn't deal with such problems, why should we? We were still young to understand all of this. 

The sea level rises significantly and this leads to severe flooding. In addition, there is no more ice in north pool during the summer, for example. The polar bears are really affected and it is very bad. In addition, the melting of the North and South Pole leads to a higher sea level, most of the countries that are affected are a few cities in Italy, Holland, Denmark and Belgium. Fortunately, I live in Germany and am not affected by the flood. 

I live normally like any other person in my society. I live with my family and I am happy. I still try to help the environment by doing something around me. I like to plant trees in my garden, for instance. In addition, I pay attention to the disposal of the garbage, and sort it. In general, I do as much as I can, of course there are also things that I cannot do without. And how do you deal with the situation? 

Finally, I hope you read my letter an I wait for your answer.  

best regards, 

Your friend 

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I hope you are doing well; we were still too young to understand all of this; In addition, there is no more ice at the North Pole in summer, for example; most of the countries that are affected are a few cities in Italy, Holland, Denmark and Belgium: Ändere diesem Satz nochmal (Italien, Holland usw sind keine Stätte oder was du damit meinst); I am still trying to help the environment by doing something around me.

Ich habe dir ein paar Fehler/Verbesserungen Markiert. Du könntest auch anstatt von "in addition" "furthermore" machmel benutzen für etwas Abwechslung.

Insgesamt ist der Text aber echt gut geworden.

LG

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