madhead241
09.04.2014, 19:45
Ist das alles so Richtig? bin nicht so gut in Englisch

Good Morning. I want to tell you something about me. My name is Maurice Riegel I´am 16 years old. I was born in Eutin 1997 and my parents are from germany. I'm from Schönwalde. I have two sister her names is Madleen and Meilique. Madleen is 19 years old, he is Azubi. Meilique is 13 and she go to school. My father's name is Thomas. My mother's name is Katrin. We've got a big house and a big garden. At the time, I visit the class H9b of the Jacob-Linau-Schule. I'm good in sport and maths. My favourite subjects are sport and maths. I go by bus to school. In my class are 19 childrens 7 girls and 12 boys. My hobbys are motocross and other sport. I have been ride motocross in MC Hansühn since 2001. I love animals and I have a dog. Her name is Tessy and she is a Husky. In my free time I meet my friends and we untertake much together. At the weekend I like to have a party with my friends. My friends and I meet at a friend and we drunk there. We drive to the party by car. The parties have diffrent locations. I have a big room and i love it. From my vocational future I'm going to visit a school in oldenburg. I work by Fiat Estermann. In the first year I must gone to school. In the second and third year I must gone two days in a week to school. The other five days I must work.

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von JaDen98
09.04.2014, 20:03

Für den Text an sich wirst du aber keine gute Bewertung bekommen, ich schätze höchstens eine 3/4, da die Sätze nicht verbunden wurden und der Text an sich auch sehr unstrukturiert ist. Also ich würde mich nochmal genau informieren wie man so eine Selbstpräsentation entwirft und dann kannst du ja deine jetztige Arbeit korrigieren! Viel Erfolg!! ;)

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madhead241
09.04.2014, 19:45
Ist das alles so Richtig? bin nicht so gut in Englisch

Good Morning. I want to tell you something about me. My name is Maurice Riegel I´am 16 years old. I was born in Eutin 1997 and my parents are from germany. I'm from Schönwalde. I have two sister her names is Madleen and Meilique. Madleen is 19 years old, he is Azubi. Meilique is 13 and she go to school. My father's name is Thomas. My mother's name is Katrin. We've got a big house and a big garden. At the time, I visit the class H9b of the Jacob-Linau-Schule. I'm good in sport and maths. My favourite subjects are sport and maths. I go by bus to school. In my class are 19 childrens 7 girls and 12 boys. My hobbys are motocross and other sport. I have been ride motocross in MC Hansühn since 2001. I love animals and I have a dog. Her name is Tessy and she is a Husky. In my free time I meet my friends and we untertake much together. At the weekend I like to have a party with my friends. My friends and I meet at a friend and we drunk there. We drive to the party by car. The parties have diffrent locations. I have a big room and i love it. From my vocational future I'm going to visit a school in oldenburg. I work by Fiat Estermann. In the first year I must gone to school. In the second and third year I must gone two days in a week to school. The other five days I must work.

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von JaDen98
09.04.2014, 19:56

So ist es besser: (können aber noch mehr Fehler drin sein, die ich nicht bemerkt habe) ------ Good Morning. I want to tell you something about me. My name is Maurice Riegel I´am 16 years old. I was born in Eutin 1997 and my parents are from Germany. I'm from Schönwalde. I have two sister her names are Madleen and Meilique. Madleen is 19 years old, she's Azubi. Meilique is 13 and she's a student. My father's name is Thomas. My mother's name is Katrin. We've got a big house and a big garden. At the time, I visit the class H9b of the Jacob-Linau-Schule. I'm good in sport and maths, which are also my favourite subjects. I go to school by bus. In my class are 19 children 7 girls and 12 boys. My hobbys are motocross and other sports. I have been riding motocross in MC Hansühn since 2001. I love animals and I've got a dog. Her name is Tessy and she is a Husky. In my free time I meet my friends and we do lots of things together. At the weekend I like to do a party with my friends. My friends and I are meeting at a friends house and we drink there together. We drive to the parties by car. The parties have diffrent locations. I have a big room and i love it. From my vocational future I'm going to visit a school in oldenburg. I'll work by Fiat Estermann. In the first year I have to go to school. In the second and third year I have to go to school twice a week to school. The other five days I must work.

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Chrissiiitinaa
28.06.2013, 22:38
Was anstatt Creme-Fraiche auf Käsekuchen?

Hallo! Habe einen Käsekuchen gebacken und sollte eigentlich eine Creme Fraiche Schicht oben drauf machen. Diese wollte ich mit ein Paar Himbeeren anmachen. Meine Frage ist jetzt: Kann ich das auch mit was anderem machen? Normaler Frischkäse und Milch vielleicht? Leider habe ich nämlich das falsche Creme Fraice gekauft-mit Kräuter!! :DDD

Hoffe auf schnelle Antworten!!! Vielen Dank!

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von JaDen98
28.06.2013, 22:41

Ich würde entweder normalen Frischkäse und Milch/Süßer Sahne nehmen oder falls vorhanden Quark mit Süßer Sahne vermischen, das müsste ja dann auf's Gleiche rauskommen.

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