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Thema: Adventure Camp/ what happened when it was really dangerous/ happy ending

 Hey Paul,

How are you? I hope you are well! Today I am talking about my adventure holiday in Australia.

You know that I am a freaky guy and you also know that I love adventures. So I booked a Adventure camp in April and went there last week. But the camp did not last long. Why? Just read my mail.

The camp was in Australia and on the first day when I arrived in small town near Sidney it was raining the whole day. After the rain finished we took out our camps and set them up. At 4am we went to a suspension bridge.

When we arrived I saw the bridge and wanted to turn around again. She did not looked good at all, boards were missing and the wind made the bridge swing. Our guides sayd the bridge was fine and we could walk over it with no problems. Julian our tour guide went as first on the bridge and suddenly a board broke. He fall down and we all thought he will be dead but he could hold himself at a branch.

Everyone was shocked but nobody could help him because die board before Julien were also broken. So we called the 911. Ten minutes later the emergency arrived. Everyone was in a hurry. Julian was just able to hold on when a fireman with a rope get down to him and put his hands and pulled him up. That was luck, everybody was happy. After half an hour we went back to the camp and the guids finished the camp earlier and everybody went home with a bit shock.

Yeah, I am still shocked but yeah this was my story about the adventures camp.

Best,

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Hey Paul,

How are you? I hope you are well! Today I am telling you about my adventure holiday in Australia.

You know that I am a little bit of a crazy guy and you also know that I love adventures. So I booked an Adventure camp in April and went there last week. But the camp did not last long. Why? Just read my mail.

The camp was in Australia and on the first day when I arrived in small town near Sidney it was raining the whole day. After the rain finished we took out our tents and set them up. At 4am we went to a suspension bridge.

When we arrived I saw the bridge and wanted to turn around again. The bridge did not look good at all, boards were missing and the wind made the bridge swing. Our guides said the bridge was fine and we could walk over it with no problems. Julian our tour guide stepped first on the bridge and suddenly a board broke. He fell down and we all thought he would be dead but he was able to grab a branch.

Everyone was shocked but nobody could help him because the boards before Julien were also broken. So we called the 911. Ten minutes later the emergency team arrived. Everyone was in a hurry. Julian was barely able to hold on when a fireman with a rope got down to him, grabbed his hands and pulled him up. That was lucky, everybody was happy. After half an hour we went back to the tents and the guide ended the camp early and everybody went home with a small shock.

Yeah, I am still shocked but this was my story about the adventure camp.

Best regards,

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