Ich muss in Englisch einen Tagebuch über unsere Londonfahrt schreiben und wollte mal fragen ob jemand den ersten Tag Korrektur liest. Danke.
Dear Diary,
Today we started our trip from ....to London. It was a long journey, but the bus was fantastic. We met in front of our school at 4.45 am.
Everybody of us was excited because the day of the departure had arrived.
At 5.00 am we started our trip to London.
We drove through Germany, the Netherlands, Belgium and France.
First we thought, the drive would be very boring, but it wasn't.
Our bus ride was very funny. We sung many songs together, listened to music and played games. In Calais we took the ferry to Dover. The passage was about 1 hour long. The size of the ferry and the view of deck fascinated me.
At about 21.30 pm we arrived at Maidenhead.
All host mums and dads waited there and the students in the bus were getting excited. Everybody thought which mom is my mom?orI want to have this dad.
We got our pogs and waited. We waited and waited. .....and me got nervous. We got to know our mum, Mrs. .....and her child, and drove to her flat. The flat was nice. Small, but new fixtures. In the living room our mum introduced her son to us and told about her family. Their son, is five years old and her husband is at the moment in Germany to the army. She herself comes from Somalia and lives for 7 years in London. Also we told about our families and the bus ride.
At 11 pm .... and me went to bed. Everybody had his own room. It was a hard day for us and we only wanted to sleep! Although I am very tired, I still can't sleep. I hope my second day in London will be very good. Good night!
Und das ist Staffel 1 oder 2, weil ich auf Wakanim die 1. Staffel komplett gesehen hab ?