Wie findet ihr die Einleitung für ein agrumentative Essay?

We have to work together to stop one of the biggest problems affecting our earth badly namely climate change. One person of us does not have the opportunity to make differences. Nevertheless, the question now arises is it really true or can someone as an individual do something positive for the earth ? In the following it will be discussed.

31.05.2021, 22:39

ist das so besser?

We have to work together to stop one of the biggest problems affecting our planet earth namely climate change. One person of us is not able to make a difference. Nevertheless, the question now arising if it is really true or if an individual can do anything positive for planet earth ? Wheather it is possibile or not will be discussed in the following.

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Vom Fragesteller als hilfreich ausgezeichnet

AstridDerPu

Von gutefrage auf Grund seines Wissens auf einem Fachgebiet ausgezeichneter Nutzer

Englisch, Sprache

31.05.2021, 20:06

Hallo,

von der Idee her gut, die Ausführung ist aber mangelhaft.

We have to work together to stop one of the biggest problems affecting our earth (Ich würde hier our planet oder planet Earth bevorzugen.) badly (Ich persönlich würde hier ein anderes adverb verwenden und es zur Betonung vor affecting stellen.) namely climate change.

One (---) of us does not have the opportunity (chance) to make differences (Singular). Nevertheless, the question now arises (Grammatik) is it really true (Grammatik, Satzstellung, Satzart, Formulierung) or can someone as an individua (Formulierung) do something (Grammatik) positive for the earth (s.o.) ? In the following it (was?) will be discussed. (Formulierung)

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de - und Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!

:-) AstridDerPu

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Fragesteller

31.05.2021, 20:13

Nevertheless, the question now arises: Is it really true or can someone as an individual do something positive for the earth ?

Was wäre da zum Bsp. falsch?😅

AstridDerPu

31.05.2021, 20:20

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... the question now arising is if it is really true or if an individual can do anything positive for planet Earth.

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Fragesteller

31.05.2021, 20:27

@AstridDerPu

oh okay :/ danke.. ich werde es korrigieren

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Fragesteller

31.05.2021, 22:38

ist das so besser?

Justin133122

31.05.2021, 19:36

Finde es gut👍

Meine sind immer schlechter🥲

         Every school should demand school uniform

In some countries all over the world school children have to wear uniforms the color scheme and style varies from school to school. In other countries pupils can wear to school what ever clothes they choose. In those countries it could be difficult to introduce school uniforms, because they are not traditionally used to wearing one. In the following essay I want to discuss the advantages to introduce school uniforms world wide.

In my opinion school uniforms ind schools are positive but negative too because not every student have the same style and they cant decide which school uniforms they wanted to wear.

School uniforms are on the one side good because a lot of children are victims of bullying because some of theme haven’t enough money to buy expensive and nice clothes. In this case the school uniform is very practically and maybe a good problem-solving.

On the other side pupils cant find our style and have to wear clothes that they don’t wanted. School uniforms can be nice but not every day ,It quickly becomes boring .However, there are people around the world for which it is too expensive ,always to buy a school uniform. Children grow fast and because of that they have to buy an again and again. We must take into account that the school uniform is maybe expensive but the clothes that the kids need for school is not cheaper and they have to be buy again and again, too.

On the other hand if the pupils wear school uniforms there is not a difference between rich and poor.

I have come to the conclusion that school uniforms are not everywhere positive and children should be able to develop their own style. Cause the bully is not reduced by a school uniform.

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was ist „i have to give you a new one“ in past tense?

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Englisch Story grammatikalisch richtig?

Ich lerne Grad für die Arbeit, und wir müssen auch eine Story schreiben. Ich habe 2 geschrieben ( sind vllt bisschen verrückt, aber ist nicht schlimm) zum lernen und möchte gerne wissen ob ich Rechtschreibfehler beinhalte und ob ich auch grammatikalisch richtig geschrieben habe. Siehe Bild schreibt mir bitte was falsch ist und welche Note ich eventuell dafür bekommen könnte:) hoffe ihr könnt das lesen 😂

Vielen vielen dank im vorraus ❤

It was Sunday I had to Babysitting at 9 o'clock so I put my clothes on and went to the family with the baby. I Rang and I heard a big cry it was the baby . so the mother open The door and said that she have to go to an important conversation . so she gave me the milk and the baby. The Baby stop crying but it don't wanted to drink the milk so it wanted to Growl . I took the baby on the ground and it went to the kitchen but I was with my phone and I don't saw it. The baby saw a Knife. I saw when the baby and i wanted to stop it but the baby was than laughing but not normal. it jumped on the ground and wanted to kill me . i ran out of the house and tried to went over the street but I fell down . The Baby came near and ran to me, to the street. I jumped out of the street but the baby was to slow and it was killed because of the car .

Das kleinschreiben nach dem Komma bitte nicht beachten.

It was a crazy Sunday . my mother said me that I have to buy two bottle milk for breakfast . so I took my jacket on and went outside . when I was outside i saw a Big Shadow on the ground , I look over me . It was a big Alien spaceship . All people screamed and I too. The door of the spaceship were opened and the aliens flew out of the Ship. I safed me behind a big house. The Aliens catched people and took them all in the spaceship. I saw so much blood, it was awful. An alien tried to find me but in the Moment i saw a Knife in the ground, so i took them and cut the head of the alien. The alien died but it cames more of them. One of them took my food and the other One my arms, i cried and screamed but then i woke up. It was all a Dream .

Bitte achtet auch nicht auf groß und klein Schreibung. Weiß wie das geht nur ich hab schnell geschrieben!

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Hilfe bei meiner Englisch-Hausaufgabe

Hallo ich habe eine Englischhausaufgabe für morgen auf und zwar habe ich einen Essay vorliegen, der unstrukturiert ist und nicht fließend ist. Deshalb muss ich diesen Essay in seine richtige Reihenfolge bringen und mit Bindungwörtern fließender schreiben. Ich würde mich sehr freuen wenn Ihr mir dabei helfen würdet.

(1) Barack Obama living the American Dream; Martin Luther King dying for it because he dared to challenge a society where segregation of races was accepted; a confident black middle class, but blacks are still discriminated against: how realistic is the American Dream?

(2) My view of the American Dream is complicated - I can see two sides to it. There is the idea that anyone can be succesful in American society, i.e that it doesn´t matter how poor you are.

(3) Through hard work you can create a better life for yourself. This is believed in it, and many of them have been succesful.

(4) Part of this idea is that anyone can become a millionaire or even a president of the USA. Most people know that is much more difficult than it sounds. Most US presidents in recent years have been very rich. Running for President costs a lot of money. All Americans are supposed to be equal, but some are definitely more equal than others.

(5) It certainly helped George Bush Jr. that he had a rich daddy when he wanted to become President.

(6) If people have to be rich to be President, it´s obvious that presidents will have less sympathy for the poor. The basic idea is that "If they´re poor, that´s because they haven´t worked hard enough."

(7) There is the other side, too.

(8) Things have changed enormously since the 1950s. In the 1950s the election of a non-white president was unthinkable, and nowadays the mayors of many big cities are black.

(9)Discrimination makes sure that some are more equal than others. As an old song from the 1950s goes, "If you´re black, stay back. If you´re brown, stick around. If you´re white, you´re all right.

(10)For me, the only sensible approach to the American Dream is to say that it helps people by giving them the belief that they can improve their lives through hard work. The popular idea that anybody can become a millionaire or US president is missleading. These are impossible goals for most people, even if they do work very hard.

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Habe ich meine Englisch Aufgaben richtig bearbeitet?

Hey Leute, ich würde mich echt freuen, wenn mal jemand raufschauen könnte😊!

Material:

Aufgaben:

1. Make a table with the statistics and pledges for the four countries.

Meine Lösung:

2. State in a short text, what the oaths and pledges have in common and how they differ.

Lösung: The differences between the two ideologies is striking. If one swears an oath to the Constitution, it implies limited government by definition. It also implies that individual rights are paramount in the American system of governance. But when one swears to support the government instead of the Constitution, those principles disappear. An oath is self-pledging by which a subject or citizen acknowledges a duty of allegiance and swears loyalty to the monarch or country. In republics, modern oaths are sworn to the country in general or to the country's constitution. Also, this is a formal and serious promise to tell the truth or do something an offensive or rude word used to express anger, frustration, surprise, etc. Oath, as mentioned above, can mean either a formal promise or an insulting word. Additionally, an oath is more often used when the person making the promise calls God as a witness to the event, such as in the Boy Scout Promise. This often comes with a price if not kept; this can be death. In my personal opinion, an oath is presented as the most "serious" of the three words. In contrast to Oath, Pledge is a serious promise or agreement a promise to give money and something you leave to another person to show that you will keep your promise. Pledge is much less formal. Similarly, the Pledge of Allegiance is a promise of loyalty to one's country. Often, the pledge refers to an amount of money that someone is willing to give to another person.

3. Which of the countries’ oath is the most agreeable to you? Explain why. The United States of America: Oath of Allegiance is the most agreeable oath to me because this serves to remind us that the United States is a constitutional republic with a federal system. The Oath also reminds us that the Constitution is the cornerstone of the American system. The government is supposed to be bound by the Constitution. As such, the government is not omnipotent, but strictly limited to the functions and purposes enumerated in the Constitution. Legislation, no matter how popular, is to be consistent with it, and any laws that conflict with it are invalid.

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Könnte jemand meine englische Hausaufgabe korrigieren?

Ich sollte einen Essay schreiben. Vielen Dank für deine Hilfe ! :)

Always live for the moment and never worry about tomorrow.

Many people claim that you should live for the moment and not care about the next day‘s problem.

Firstly, it is nice to enjoy the life and don’t be worried about the consequences but on the long run you can’t achieve anything with this mindset. If you have dreams you should be conscious about your present. Secondly, before acting is recommended to think about the consequences. Without consideration your future can be destroyed easily.

On the other hand, overthinking is a huge phenomena . It provokes fears and anxiety. Even though you have wants you don’t take any steps to achieve them because you are afraid of people’s opinion. This approach makes you numb.

In my opinion, the best thing you can do is the find the middle way. You can enjoy the life without making blunders if you act at your discretion.

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Passt der Englische Text?

In the poem ‚,The Schoolboy‘‘ by William Blake, you get a clear message that the schoolboy doesn’t enjoy the school and its system at all, so the question that arises is ,,What could school do, to be more enjoyable for the schoolboy and students like me?‘‘

First of all many students have to wake up early in the morning, which isn’t a perfect start into the day. Furthermore they mostly can’t enjoy the morning even if they like to stand up early, because they must get finished quickly for school. To counteract this problem, it would be a good start to begin with school less early and to approach the day more calmly. So to remove the effect of a prison it’s important to produce a more peaceful environment for everyone, to make the classrooms more comfortable and even integrate some outdoors schoollessons in spring and summer, so that the pupils have more joy in learning and are able to concentrate more because of the fresh air and the nature. Last but not least we schoolboys anf schoolgirls should be allowed to have more own thoughts and to be able to control them and not just being forced to memorize things, which won’t be even important for our adulthood.

I also think that the last point which is beinh made here, is a fact which the author want to draw attention to, because it’s a mostly international problem that should has to change as we are not robots.

(Also mit dem letzten Teil bin ich eher unzufrieden weil so oft which drankommt)

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Hey könntet ihr mir sagen, ob meine Mediation gut ist oder, ob man etwas verbessern sollte?

The Articel „Tausch dich glücklich“ written by Simon Frost in the year 2013 and in the articel „Repair Cafés: Basteln gegen die Werfwerfgesellschaft written by Haiko Prengel in the Year 2013 explains why many Germans have changed their consumer behaviour.

More and more Germans are using exchange platforms to change their old items with other users. This is because many Germans do not want to throw away their old items such as refrigerators or toasters.

Furthermore, the exchange platforms are interesting for the users because everybody is always curious about what one will get in exchange for one's product. Nevertheless, it should be noted that material things are more valuable to the seller than immaterial things. For this reason, it is always difficult to exchange material things.

Because of this problem, the barter exchanges have created a point system where people get points for certain exchanged things and can redeem these points for vouchers.

One of the most important reasons for trading is that it means that people do not throw away products but recycle them and give them to other people. This contributes to the environment because it reduces waste products and keeps the products in the product cycle.

For this reason, other companies offer donation campaigns to donate to environmental organizations. This change contributes positively to the environment

In the second article more and more Germans are fighting against throwing away products. To this end, people have created several repair cafés where mechanics make old electrical appliances functional again. In this way, they recycle or repair the product and it can be reused.

The important thing is that nothing should be thrown away. With this idea, they want to control consumer behavior by offering consumers in several cities to have small or large defects repaired by mechanics. The problem is that consumers are too quick to throw away products with small defects. Saving money should not play a role, but people should learn to act more sustainably.

In conclusion, it can be said that more and more Germans want to be more environmentally conscious with exchange platforms. Furthermore, repair cafés should lead people to use their products more sustainably and to have them repaired if they are defective. This should reduce the number of disposable products.

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Kann mir jemand mein Englisch Aufsatz korrigieren?

Muss in Englisch einen Aufsatz über mein Meerschweinchen schreiben. Ich habe erst seit einen Jahr Englisch und bin noch nicht so gut darin.

my Guinea pig Bonnie.

I have five guinea pigs at home but today i I tell you more about Bonnie. Bonnie is a 1 years old swiss teddy with red eyes and dark ears. She has long white fuzzy hair sometimes we have to cut it but only behind. I have her since last summer, she comed from a breeder from ######. At her first day she had to go to the vet. Because one of my other guinea pigs hit her in the face and her eye bleeding. The doctor gave her a syringe and eye drop. I had to give her two weeks eye drop. But now she don’t notice anymore. Bonnie is always ready to get her food as she is always the first one down to eat her veggies. She is the fastest Guinea of the five. She love to eat tomatoes. mostly it is a calm guinea pig but when she hear something rustle she screams very loud.Trying to clip her nails is a fight of death or life tho. Atleast that's what it must be like for her since he will flap his whole body around like a seal to escape. Ayana is the only other pig that Bonnie like the other not so. She argues a lot with the others.

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Gehört ,,The woman‘‘ zu he/she/ it?

Wie die Frage schon oben steht, gehört ,,The woman‘‘ = ,,die Frau‘‘ zu he/seh/it also The woman was able to… oder were able to?

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Wann benutzt man in Englisch "need to", "got to", "have to" für MUSS in Deutsch?

I have to go = Ich MUSS los/gehen

I have to admit .. = Ich MUSS zu geben...

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You gotta keep your head up = Du MUSST dein Kopf hochhalten

You gotta love it = Du MUSST es lieben

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I need to win = Ich MUSS gewinnen

I need to wake up = Ich MUSS aufwachen

"Must" benutzt man mit "be", ok verstehe ich.. aber was ist mit den anderen ?? Wann benutze ich HAVE TO , GOT TO und NEED TO für MUSS ???

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„To ne a friend of the earth you have to be an enemy of the people?“ Habt ihr dazu pro und Contra Argumente?

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Veganism?

Hallo, kann jemand mir bitte diesen Text korrigieren ob das richtig ist und alle Punkte erfüllt sind.

Nowadays, more and more people have become vegan. Many people I want to follow the trend,because they see veganism as a social trend. It become more because people want to save animals from the intensiv mass animal farming. It is healthy to be vegan and and it might be delicious. if a lot of people become vegan, they could help the world and save the planet. Some of people pay attention to eat products that are environmently friendly to be environment ..

My whole life has changed as a vegan. Sometimes it was difficult to buy vegan products and to make sure if the products are made for vegan people. Also one can have trouble achieving protein needs with out eating protein addition,because proteins supplement can mainly be found in animals products such as milk. eggs and meat.

At first, it was a little bit boring,because I like meat.But over Time, eating vegan food is an interesting experience. Being vegan isn't only effective only for human, but also for environment.It could reduce our environmental impact on earth also it could reduce our carbon footprint.

soll ich eine Anrede Schreiben?

Danke Im Voraus.

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Reported speech: Stimmen die Sätze so?

He said 'Peter would like to have a party at the weekend'

> He said Peter would have liked to have a party at the weekend.

Tom said 'If I had more time, I would go to the concert on Friday'

> Tom said if he had had more time, he would have gone to the concert on Friday.

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