Könnte jemand meine englische Hausaufgabe korrigieren?
Ich sollte einen Essay schreiben. Vielen Dank für deine Hilfe ! :)
Always live for the moment and never worry about tomorrow.
Many people claim that you should live for the moment and not care about the next day‘s problem.
Firstly, it is nice to enjoy the life and don’t be worried about the consequences but on the long run you can’t achieve anything with this mindset. If you have dreams you should be conscious about your present. Secondly, before acting is recommended to think about the consequences. Without consideration your future can be destroyed easily.
On the other hand, overthinking is a huge phenomena . It provokes fears and anxiety. Even though you have wants you don’t take any steps to achieve them because you are afraid of people’s opinion. This approach makes you numb.
In my opinion, the best thing you can do is the find the middle way. You can enjoy the life without making blunders if you act at your discretion.
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Many people claim that you should live for the moment and not care about (---) next day‘s problem.
Firstly, it is nice to enjoy (---) life and don’t be (Grammatik) worried about the consequences but on (Wort) the long run you can’t achieve anything with this mindset. If you have dreams you should be conscious about your present. Secondly, before acting (Hier fehlt ein Wort.) is recommended to (Wendung) think about the consequences. Without consideration your future can be destroyed easily.
On the other hand, overthinking is a huge phenomena (Grammatik). It provokes fears and anxiety. Even though you have wants (Komma) you don’t take any steps to achieve them because you are afraid of people’s opinion. This approach makes you numb.
In my opinion, the best thing you can do is the (Wort) find the middle way. You can enjoy (---) life without making blunders if you act at your discretion.
Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
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:-) AstridDerPu
Danke für deine Korrektur ! Ich verstehe sie aber vielmals nicht.
and don’t be (Grammatik) worried ?
(Hier fehlt ein Wort.) is recommended to (Wendung) think about the ?
overthinking is a huge phenomena (Grammatik). ?
the best thing you can do is the (Wort) find the middle way. ?
Wenn du Zeit und Lust hast, könntest du sie korrigieren, leider kann ich nicht draufkommen, wo meine Fehler liegen.
Many people claim that you should live for the moment and not care about the next day‘s problem.
Firstly, it is nice to enjoy the life and to have ho worries about the consequences but on the long run you can’t achieve anything with this mindset. If you have dreams you should be conscious about your present. Secondly, before acting it is recommended to think about the action's consequences. Without consideration your future can be destroyed easily.
On the other hand, overthinking is a huge phenomena . It provokes fears and anxiety. Even though you have wants you don’t take any steps to achieve them because you are afraid of people’s opinion. ←verstehe diesen Satz nicht. This approach makes you numb. ←verstehe diesen Satz nicht
In my opinion, the best thing you can do is to find a middle way. You can enjoy the life without making blunders if you act at your discretion.
Bin erst zwölf und kann deshalb den Text nicht so gut korrigieren bin aber Muttersprachlerin