Verbesserung englischer Text?
Hallo an alle! Wir schreiben bald Schulaufgabe und wir müssen da immer einen Text zu einem Thema schreiben. Ich habe das nun mal an unserem aktuellen Thema “Australien” ausprobiert und geübt. Allerdings habe ich niemanden, der mir den Text verbessern kann. Könnte einer von euch mir vielleicht dabei helfen? 😁 😉
We all know Australia. It’s a beautiful country which capital is Canberra and whose biggest city is Sydney. The native Australians are the Aboriginal people. But Australia is also very famous because of the Uluru, a landmark in Australia, and the Bondi beach. But what animals can you see in this country? There are box jellyfishes, who can sting, and sharks, who can bite, in the water. In the outback are animals like kangaroos, wombats, and emus. In the jungle, you can find animals like koalas and snakes. As you can see, there are many dangerous animals in Australia which is why you should never go alone in the outback or the jungle.
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Bin zwar kein Profi und mach grad das gleiche Thema aber ich kann’s mal versuchen :) ich schreib den Text einfach mal ab und ergänze wenn ich was finde:
We all know Australia. It is a beautiful country and its capital is Canberra but the biggest city with the most residents in the country is Sidney. The native Australians are called Aboriginals. But Australia is not only famous for its interesting native Culture but also for some beautiful landmarks like for example the Uluru, wich is a mountain that is holy ground for the Aboriginals or the very well known Bondi beach. But what about animals you can see in Australia? There is a wide variety of sea life for example the box jellyfish, that can sting you or sharks that luckily don’t bite people as often as you think. But there are even more interesting animals on land: For example kangaroos, wombats and emus. In parts of Australia where there is Jungle you can also find snakes and koalas. As you can see there are many cute but also many dangerous animals in Australia wich is only one of the reasons why the outback and the jungle are is so dangerous there.
ich weis jetzt nicht ob das jetzt besser oder schlechter ist aber vielleicht nützt es dir ja was 🤝 und ich weiß auch nicht was ihr grad so durchnehmt über Australien weil wir schon fast durch sind aber ja :) viel Glück ach ja is übrigens ein sehr schöner Text
