HILFE DRINGEND! Fantasie Reise Hausaufgabe für Englisch!
Haben eine Hausaufgaben Arbeit bekommen wo wir Noten drauf bekommen . Wir müssen so eine fabtasie Reise machen auf Englisch und sie vor der Klasse Vortragen . Der Lehrer wird auf Grammatik achten und ich will euch fragen ob ihr meine englisch Grammatik prüfen könnt im Text und gegebenenfalls nachbessern könntet ? Wir sollten in ING Form schreiben .
Imaginary Jorney
Welcome to the jorney to Africa.Close your eyes and Relax. You Are walking out of the classroom and you are going into the Bus . You are driving to the airport in Frankfurt. You are going in the Plain. Look down! Can you See the mountains in Austria ? It is a wonderful since! We are now in africa and the Plain is flying down. You are going out of the Plain. Can You feel the warm air in your Face? It is a beautiful feeling. You Are walking in to a Jungle . Can You feel the gras under your Feets? LOOK! There is a Monkey! He is Jumping Around. You Are now going back to the Plain . Look this beatiful Ozean ...... :€ ! There is Fulda ! You Are going to the back of the Plain and Jump Off the Plain with your parachute. Your Are Landing on the schoolyard. You Are now going into the altbau in your classroom. Now stretch Low your arms and legs and open your eyes. FERTIIGGGGGGGGGG🔫🚬🔆🔫🔆🔆🔖🔆📨📦🔆📦📆📦📆🔅📭🔆🔪📔🔧🔧
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Imaginary Journey Welcome to the journey to Africa. Close your eyes and relax. You Are walking out of the classroom and you are going to take a Bus . You are driving to the airport in Frankfurt. You take a plain. Look down! Can you see the mountains in Austria? It is a wonderful sight! After exhausting hours of flying, we are now in africa and the plain lands. You are going out of the Plain. Can you feel the warm air in your face? It is a beautiful feeling. You Are walking in to a jungle. All around you are strange noises. These are the sounds of pure nature. Can You feel the grass under your feets? LOOK! There is a Monkey! He is jumping around you. You are now going back to the Plain. Look at this beatiful Ocean ...... :€ ! There is Fulda ! The plain is still flying but you make your way to an exit door, open it and you jump with your parachute an your back. Your are landing on the schoolyard. You are now going into the altbau in your classroom. Now stretch lower your arms and legs and open your eyes.
Immer noch plain??? Aua! Es sind immer noch viele Fehler drin! Stern hin oder her...
Oh ja "plain" ist mir entfallen... Wie peinlich!!! Nun ja "plain" bitte zu "plane" ändern!!!
So deinen Text habe ich ausgedruckt und morgen wird er vorgelesen. Wenn ich eine schlechtere Note als 3- bekomme , dann krikst du den Stern nicht ! Also drück mir die Daumen ! Heheh
Also jetzt hör mal, das ist ja moralische Erpressung. Ich bin nicht für deine schulische Leistung verantwortlich. Ich hab das nur gemacht, weil ich Englisch mag, nicht weil ich auf ne 1+ aus bin.
hahahaha ich kann nicht mehr XD er hat wohl doch keine so gute Note bekommen XD
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It is a wonderful since? -> Was meinst du mit since?
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Imaginary Jorney
Welcome to the jorney to Africa.Close your eyes and Relax. You Are walking out of the classroom and you are going into the Bus . You are driving to the airport in Frankfurt. You are going in the Plain. Look down! Can you See the mountains in Austria ? It is a wonderful since! We are now in africa and the Plain is flying down. You are going out of the Plain. Can You feel the warm air in your Face? It is a beautiful feeling. You Are walking in to a Jungle . Can You feel the gras under your Feets? LOOK! There is a Monkey! He is Jumping Around. You Are now going back to the Plain . Look this beatiful Ozean ...... :€ !
There is Fulda ! You Are going to the back of the Plain and Jump Off the Plain with your parachute. Your Are Landing on the schoolyard. You Are now going into the altbau in your classroom (Word Order, Prepositions). Now stretch Low (Ausdruck) your arms and legs (Word Order) and open your eyes.
Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,
für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.
:-) AstridDerPu
Imaginary Journey
Welcome to the journey to Africa.Close your eyes and relax. You are walking out of the classroom and you are going to the/into a bus .You are driving to the airport in Frankfurt. You are going in the plain.Look down! Can you see the mountains in Austria ? It is such a wonderful view! We are now in africa and the plain is flying down. You are going out of the plain.Can you feel the warm air in your face?It is a beautiful feeling. Now you are walking in to a Jungle . Can You feel the gras under your feets? LOOK! There is a Monkey! He is jumping around. Now you are going back to the plain.Look,what a beatiful Ozean ...... :€ ! There is Fulda ! You are going to the back of the plain and Jump Off the plain with your parachute. Your are landing on the schoolyard. Now you are going into your classroom. Now stretch Low your arms and legs and open your eyes.
Waren ein paar kleine Verbesserungsvorschläge,zur Grammatik selbst kann ich nicht so viel sagen.
Am besten du baust öfter Wörter wie Now.then,After that,suddenly ein damit es etwas interessanter gestaltet wird und übrigens nicht You are Now going sondern Now you are going
Viele Grüße
Da sind ganz schön viele Schreib- und Vokabelfehler drin. Flugzeug heißt z.B. plane, um nur eines zu nennen. Auch am Ausdruck müsste man noch schwer arbeiten.
Wenn Du das falsche Wort benutzt, ist es dann eben nicht egal!
Beste Antwort ! Vielen Dank beste Antwort ! du hast ein Steinvon mein Herz fallen gelassen ! Krikst den Stern