Opinion about piercings?
"I don’t really care if someone had tattoos/piercings or not. I am not against it but I also am not a lover I like the ‘standard’ ones like ear piercings, liprings, nose piercings and I also think that stretched ears are pretty cool, but not too big. So I think piercings are okay but not too much. There are people who have piercings all over their face and I personally don’t like that."
Ist das so richtig? Ich denk mal der 2. Satz ist falsch oder? :D
3 Antworten
I don't really care if someone has tattoos/piercings or not. I am not against it but I also don't love them. I like a few piercings like ear piercings, lip piercings, nose piercings and I think that streched ears are pretty cool, too, if they are not too big. (dein Satz war nicht falsch aber ich hab ihn jetzt mal so geschrieben wie ich ihn schreiben würde :D) So all in all I think piercings are okay when you don't have to much of them. (der letzte satz ist richtig aber den kannst du auch weglassen :))
Du hattest nur paar kleine Fehler (fett gedruckt). Das was nicht fett gedruckt ist kannst du so wie oben schreiben hab es einfach mal so geschrieben wie ich es "gelernt" habe. (machen das grade in der Schule) :)
I don’t really care if someone had tattoos/piercings or not. I am not against it Komma but I also am not a lover - (verwende either)
neuer Satz I like the ‘standard’ ones like ear piercings, liprings (Standard?), nose piercings and I also think that stretched ears are pretty cool, but not too big. So I think piercings are okay Komma but not too much. There are people who have piercings all over their face and I personally don’t like that.
Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen. Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com, für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.
AstridDerPu
"I don’t really care if someone has tattoos/piercings or not. I am not against it but I also<--> am not a lover. I like the ‘standard’ ones like ear piercings, liprings, nose piercings and I also think that stretched ears are pretty cool, but not too big. So I think piercings are okay but not too much. There are people who have piercings all over their face and [I] personally I don’t like that."
