Kurzer Bericht über meinen Urlaub in New York!

Wir sollen einen kurzen Bericht über die ferien in New York schreiben und ich wollte wissen ob mein Bericht okay ist.

In my last holidays my family and I were in New York. First we went to our hotel and slept 8 hours. Then we ate Bagels at ,,Deli". Subsequently we visited to Central Park. There we saw the Statue of Liberty. I had forgot my camera in the hotel and I don't take photos. Later we were on the empire state building. The empire state building is very high. At the night we went to the time square and everything was bling bling. We saw many big screens. It was my best holidays in my life.

Answer 1

[unkow104]

Ich kann dir nicht garantieren das es richtig ist was ich hier schreibe, aber klingt meiner Meinung nach nach besserem Englisch.

Then we ate bagels at '' Deli's'' Subsequently we visited Central Park (auch nicht mit 'the' .. das ist 100% falsch) ..and I don't took photos. the empire state building was very high

Comments

[LachKick12]

Dankeee für die schnelle Antwort

[KathaKL]

@LachKick12

jup aber don't took photos kann man nicht sagen, entweder didn't take photos oder halt couldn't take oder wasn't able to :)

[unkow104]

@KathaKL

achso ok :)

Answer 2

[KathaKL]

..we visited central parc...i had forgotten my camera, so i couldn't take...in the evening... it have been my best holidays ever... so würd ich das machen :p

Comments

[LachKick12]

Dankeee und ist also das was ich geschrieben habe falsch?

[KathaKL]

@LachKick12

ja also das was ich jetzt verbessert hab war falsch :p der rest war ok :)

[LachKick12]

@KathaKL

Danke :-)

[Akka2323]

Vom Central Park aus kann man die Freiheitsstatue nicht sehen!

Answer 3

[AstridDerPu]

In my last holidays my family and I were in New York. First we went to our hotel and slept 8 hours. Then we ate Bagels at ,,Deli". Subsequently Komma we visited (---) (besser: wen to) Central Park. There we saw the Statue of Liberty. I had forgot (Zeit; RS) my camera in the hotel and I don't take photos. Later we were on the empire state building. The empire state building is very high. At the night Komma we went to (---) time square and everything was bling bling. We saw many big screens. It was my best holidays in my life.

Sätze auch mal miteinander verbinden, als Relativsätze oder mit Linking Words.

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.eu,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de.

AstridDerPu

Comments

[Akka2323]

I had forgotten and I didn't take... Time Square groß,

[AstridDerPu]

@Akka2323

Das habe ich doch als falsch markiert. Du hast meinen Beitrag nicht bis zum Ende gelesen oder nicht richtig verstanden.