Hallo kann mir das bitte jemand in 4-5 Sätze Machen bekomme es nicht hin?
The Story “Joy riding” is about two boys who want to impress the Girls. Jake and Max saw Kayla’s Dad car with Kayla and Lucy in there. They invite them to a race but they have no driver license. The two Boys choose an old Chevy and cracked the door open. At the end of the road saw they Ash and Lucy and start the race, while the Race there was a bend a Jake noticed too late and crashed into the barrier and stopped. At the End Lucy was woke up in the hospital and doesn’t now where here friends are
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The Story Joy Riding is about Jack and Max, two boys, who wanted to impress two Girl, named Kayla and Lucy. Although the had no driver license, they invited them to a race and cracked a car open. During the race the boys crashed into a barrier, because they noticed a band too late. In the End they woke up in the hospital.
(Vielleicht solltest du noch mal auf die Zeitformen in deinem Text achten.)
