Englisch Statement über die Umwelt?

Ich habe dieses Statement über die Umwelt und Naturkatstrophen geschrieben und würde gerne wissen, was man da noch verbessern kann. Ist das gut geschrieben?

"Natural disasters such as earthquakes, tsunamis and volcanic eruptions have often occurred and will continue to occur. Actually, such disasters are very rare, but the people make the situation worse.

Because of our garbage, which we throw on the ground without hesitation or all the plastic, which we let disappear into the oceans, such disasters happen more and more often. Or all the CO2 that is generated by our cars or airplanes. Humans are destroying this planet over time, and as we become more and more human, the earth as we know it will soon no longer exist."

Answer 1

[AstridDerPu]

"Natural disasters such as earthquakes, tsunamis and volcanic eruptions have often occurred and will continue to occur (Wiederholung). Actually, such disasters are very rare, but the people make the situation worse.

Because of the garbage (---) we throw on the ground without hesitation and all the plastic (---) we let (Verb) disappear into (Präposition) the oceans, such disasters happen more and more often. Or all the CO2 that is generated by our cars or airplanes. (Das ist kein vollständiger Satz.) Humans are destroying this planet over time, and as we become more and more (Wiederholung) human (Grammatik), the earth as we know it will soon no longer exist."

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

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:-) AstridDerPu