Englisch Text about food?
Habe am Dienstag Schularbeit und mir wäre echt geholfen wenn mir wer diesen Text verbessern könnte! Danke!
A post about food in school!
In the last two weeks I spend a lot of time in our kitchen in school. I asked them about the ingredients and the freshness. Does they cook always fresh or is there any mall-stye food? My school offers a big menu, so we have a big choice. At first you can have a soup or a salad, it depens on your mood. For main dish you can eat a vegetarian, sweet or a meat meal. These three meals are everyday on the menu. I would say it's an extensional case. On Friday you can find a lot of fish. In case we often eat at school and we also get our drinks there. The only soda we have is ice tea. Everybody knows that there is many sugar in it. I am in the fifth form and me and my friends are only drinking water or apple juice. In our cafeteria we have also sweets and ice cream but our teachers sometimes take care about our eating habits.
I think there is nothing what I can improve. Because it's all fine and we can make our own choices without thinking about calories and sugar, there is nothing what hurts our body.
1 Antwort
Hi laurasophhh,
ich hab mir den Text mal durch gelesen und gleich meine Verbesserungsvorschläge rein geschrieben. Ich hoffe das ist ok so für dich:) (Kleiner Tipp: die Engländer mögen gerne mehrere Abschnitte und achte auf die Konjugationen und Zeitformen)
Grüsse summer0907:)
A post about food at school!
In the past two weeks I have spent a lot of time in our kitchen at school. I asked the personnel about the ingredients and the freshness of the food. Do they always cook fresh or is there any mall-style food?
My school offers a big menu, so we have a big choice. At first you can have either a soup or a salad, whatever you prefer. As main dish you can choose between a vegetarian, a sweet or a meat meal. These three meals are on the menu everyday. I would say it's an extensional variety. On Friday you always find fish on the menu.
As we often eat at school we can furthermore order our drinks there as well, unfortunately though the only soda we have is ice tea. Everybody knows that there is a lot sugar in it. I am in the fifth form (was meist du mit fifth form?) therefore me and my friends only drink water or apple juice. In our cafeteria we have sweets and ice cream but our teachers have an eye on our eating habits, so we do not consume them too regularly.
I think there is nothing that needs inprovement in our cafeteria. It's great, we can make our own choices what we`d like to eat, without bothering about calories or sugar, there is nothing that is unhealthy or would hurt our bodies.