Bild beschreiben: Strand
Ich muss in Englisch ein Bild beschreiben (150 wörter). Bch hab es schon geschrieben, bin mir aber mit der Grammatik und mit der Rechtschreibung nicht sicher. Vielleicht könnt ihr es ja durch lesen und es verbesseren.
In the picture I can see many people at the beach. The sun is shining. And the sky is blue, the beach look golden. All the people are wearing summer clothes or bikinis. Some of them are in the sea and the other are lying on they towers,which on the beach. Some are having a sunburn. They towers are having a lot of colors. At the backround I see many trees, it look like a forest. I think the people in the sea are having a lot of fun. At the front of the trees is a white wall and in front of there is a volleyball net. Many of the children are having an air mattress in different patterns. Probably it is in the summer vacation. Maybe it is in August and maybe in a other country, it can be in turkey etc.
Das Bild: http://bilder.t-online.de/b/64/79/36/92/id_64793692/tid_da/der-strand-am-helenesee.jpg
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In this picture you can see many people on the beach. The sun is shining and the sky is blue. The beach looks golden. All the people are wearing summer clothes or bikinis. Some of them are in the sea and others are lying on their colourful towels. Some people have a sunburn. In the background you can see many tress, it looks like a forest. It seems like all the people in the sea are having a lot of fun. In front of the trees you can see a white wall and a volleyball net. Many children have an air mattress in different patterns. It looks like summer vacation on the beach in the middle of the year.
Korrektur einiger Fehler, die wirklich nicht hätten passieren müssen, z.B. Türme statt Handtücher, oder they statt their! Achte auch auf das -s bei 3.P. Sg. !) :
In the picture you see many people on the beach. The sun is shining and the sky is blue, the beach looks golden. All the people are wearing summer clothes or bikinis. Some of them are in the sea and others are lying on their towels on the beach. Some are getting a sunburn. Their towels have a lot of different colours. In the background there are many trees, it looks like a forest. I think the people in the sea are having a lot of fun. In front of the trees there is a white wall and in front of it there is a volleyball net. Many of the children have air mattresses in different patterns. Probably it is during the summer vacation. Maybe it is in August and maybe in another country, it may be in Turkey for instance.