Hi, my name is Silin. I live in Vienna with my family. My father is a chef and my mother is a housewife. I have invented a new smartphone, which is very useful for blind people. It looks just like a normal smartphone at first but it's actually voice controlled - making it unique. In order to make a call, you can just ask it to dial mom. This is a huge advantage for people that can't see at all or not good. It's available in almost every store, I don't make a lot from it though.

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HI, my name is Silin. I live in Vienna with my family. My father is a chef cook and my mother is a housewife. I have invented a new smartphone. This invention is very useful for blind people. My invention looks like a normal smartphone but the difference is that it is voice controlled. I think this is the interesting thing on my invention. You only must say what you want, for example "call my mom". I think it's good for people that can't see. I don't make a lot of my invention. You can get it in every store and it's not very cheap.

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