Englisch Referat, stimmt mein Text?

Hey ich habe bald Englisch Prüfung und kann/darf keinem Lehrer mein Referat zum nachprüfen geben. Jetzt frage ich euch ob ihr mir helfen könnt es richtig zu schreiben falls Fehler drin sind.

Ghandi was born on October 2nd 1869 in Porbandar, India. He was an Indian lawyer, resistance fighter, revolutionary and pacifist.

In May 1883, the 13-year old Mohandas was married to 14-year old Kasturba. In 1885, when Gandhi was 15, the couple's first child was born, but survived only a few days.

1888, less than a month shy of his 19th birthday, Gandhi traveled to London, to study law at University College London. Gandhi served in and lead an Ambulance Corps Unit in both the Boer War 1899-1892 and the Zulu War of 1906.

Beginning of the 20th century Gandhi has worked in South Africa against segregation. In 1910 he developed in India to the political leaders of the independence movement. Gandhi urged the human rights of women and he advocated the reconciliation between Hindus and Muslims.

In 1915, Gandhi returned from South Africa to live in India. He built his Harijan Ashram and lived from 1918 to1930 there. He called for non-violent resistance. The Indians retreated so back from the public. They understood the way and made him to it. In 1930 he called for a saltmarsh and calls for the control of the food abolish.

On August 15, 1947 India attained independence. Since the country was divided into two states, the freedom fighter went on a hunger strike. Since no one wanted the death of him peace was concluded. Without Gandhi would the peace never had closed. The action broke hatred of him and many people were suddenly against him.

A madman who felt Gandhi guilty shot him on January 30, 1948. Gandhi died.

The world celebrating him as a model and national heroes.

Bin gespannt und danke im Vorraus. :)

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