so dürfte das passen:

Dear Team

My Family and I

My name is ...and I live in...Rhineland-Palatinate (Rheinland Pfalz). I`m born in ... in ..., Rheinland-Pfalz. My birthday is on April 4th 1999. I have got an elder and a younger brother (...(18) and ...(10)). ...(née ...) and ...are my parents. My mother is born in ... and my father in .... .... is my dog. He is seven years old and is an Shetland Sheepdog. The first eight years of my life I spent in ----(Northrhine-Westphalia) then we moved to ... (Rheinland-Pfalz).

My hobbies are drawing pictures and reading books. I often meet my friends. I have played handball for nine years.. Now I’m part of the the team in .... And I have played basketball for two years now.. I sing in the band “....”. We vocalize in the church.

When I meet people for the first time, I’m a bit shy for the first moments.

Since two years about I have thought of going to Great Britain. English is a very nice language and Great Britain has a lot of interesting things to see. And I can meet new people and new friends. If my host family is nice we will stay in contact. And my English knowledge will improve. I think it is a good thing to go to Great Britain.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Best wishes.

TOI TOI TOI ung LG