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Schlager – Germany’s most hatd music genre?

There is a no more controversial topic in Germany than “Schlager”. In the following, I will refer to the article “Seicht verdientes Geld”, published in the magazine of the German train by Vera Stegner and Mathis Vogel which deals with the attitude Germans have towards Schlager Music and the business connected to it.

For a long time Germans had an ambivalent behaviour towards Schlager music, as on the one hand there werde fanatics being extremely obsessed with this genre and on the other hand, there were people being absolutely disgusted by it. Enjoying Schlager music should not even be admitted publically, as it was considered as embarrassing. However, this attitude changed drastically because nowadays people perceive this music genre as new, exciting, and authentic since people listening to it can feel closer to the interprets. According to a study, Schlager music is the favourite genre of 22% of the Germans and every second person enjoys listening to it at least. This success is also reflected in the amount of revenue which is generated by this music genre. Especially CD’s are bough which are responsible for 60% of the genre’s revenue. There is an increasing shape of artists who try to produce Schlager Music since it is considered as profitable. However, as there are more and more people writing Schlager songs, it is difficult that one’s song will become popular. Nevertheless it is stated that trying one’s luck in the Schlager music sector is safer than gambling. 

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Schlager – Germany’s most hated music genre?

There is a no more controversial topic in Germany than “Schlager”. In the following, I will refer to the article “Seicht verdientes Geld”, published in the magazine of the German train by Vera Stegner and Mathis Vogel which deals with the attitude Germans have towards Schlager Music and the business connected to it.

For a long time Germans had an ambivalent behavior towards Schlager music. On the one hand there were fanatics extremely obsessed with this genre and on the other hand, there were people absolutely disgusted by it. Enjoying Schlager music should not even be admitted publicly, as it was considered as embarrassing. However, this attitude changed drastically because nowadays people perceive this music genre as new, exciting, and authentic since people listening to it can feel closer to the interprets. According to a study, Schlager music is the favorite genre of 22% of the Germans and at least every second person enjoys listening to it. This success is also reflected in the amount of revenue which is generated by this music genre. Especially CD’s are bought which are responsible for 60% of the genre’s revenue. There is an increasing shape of artists who try to produce Schlager Music since it is considered as profitable. However, as there are more and more people writing Schlager songs, it is difficult that one’s song will become popular. Nevertheless it is stated that trying one’s luck in the Schlager music sector is safer than gambling.

Ich kann aber nicht garantieren, dass es komplett richtig ist. 

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Nein quatsch

Allein der Gedanke, dass Männer als Helden angesehen werden, wenn sie möglichst viel Sex haben, ist Quatsch. Aber sobald eine Frau ein aktives Sexleben mit anderen Männern hat, wird sie als billig abgestempelt. So gehört es sich absolut nicht!!!! Und warum sollten Frauen aus "biologischer Sicht" nur alle 10 Monate Sex haben??? Da gibt es keine Strategie, nur der Unterschied, ob du dich in die Angelegenheiten von anderen Menschen einmischst oder du dich dafür entscheidest, dich um dein eigenes Leben zu kümmern.

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