Hallo, kann mir jemand sowohl sprachliche, inhaltliche als auch allgemeine Verbesserungen zu meiner rede geben? Vielen Dank schon im Voraus
Hello fellow citizens,
Today I am telling about a better lifestyle for you.
Do you want to be fat like me? No? Then listen now to my speech.
I am going to learn that to you. First I am going to inform you about the problems and reasons, which make you sick and fat. In the second part I will tell you, how you avoid these problems.
A big problem is the fast-food. It is with very much fat, which is not good. And the products like burger have more salt then equal other products. The next reason is sugar. In nature the sugar is very rare so we can handle it easy. But now we have too much sugar. In softdrinks, cakes, candies. Everywhere is sugar. And our body saves that fat. A study from a famous university confirms that people, who lived 300 years earlier, were 30% healthier then now.
I was really shocked, while I have hearing that. So I asked myself, what I can do against this.
I hope you are thinking the same at the moment, because I am informing you now how you avoid these problems and lead a healthier livestyle.
First you need to ban all softdrinks or drinks with a lot of sugar out of your live. If you drink more water, you will get healthier!
Then don`t eat so much fast food. If you cook sometimes yourself with different groceries, you will be lesser sick and it will be more tasty.
I give you now my last hint: Move you more times. If you make regular and often sports, you will reduce the risk of die early. And it doesn´t matter, which sport you play. The important thing is just move.
So ban softdrinks, fast food and move more times! If everyone did this, just a small percentage would be overweight and we would be lesser sick.
Thanks for your attention.