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Dear readers,

today I'm going to explen a bit about my favourite hobby. Firstly there are many differta kinds of hobbies and every hobbies has is on uniqueness. Therefore you never justify oneself to somebody about your hobby. But how find our favourite hobby?. Thought you attempt differatnd kinds of hobby. Futhorme you shouldn't give up, when the first hobby isn't your passion.

Also I attempt many Hobbys. Only thus you can find your favourite hobby and it alway can change, becouse you alter. You are never the same person as 1 sec before. A important Faktor is you are never to old for any Hobbys.

As i was a young child, I would do all hobby. But then I find out that many hobbies aren't my passion,therfore I was heaving-hearted about it, then I ceased to search about my hope. One day I found my favourite hobby, think I was 5 years old, as I found out what is my favorite hobby,but I don't remember the beginning of the story, so my parents told me about it. One day my parents picked me up from the nursery school. At this day always was completely different,becouse I was all smiles. . As I came out, I told my mother and my father with a glad voice, i had danced in the nursery school. At the way back home I could not cease to talk about dnace.my parents war so blissfully happy that I was so happy about dancing , that they reported my on a danc club. The older I got, the clearer it became to me which kind of dance I would like to have. Now I dancing in a dancing club the kinds jazz and contemporary.

You could bring your thoughts and possibly your hobbies a little closer to me in the comments.

Thanks for reading and until next time

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