Guten Tag,
könntet ihr mir bitte sagen was ich an meinem Dear Family Letter noch verbessern soll.
Danke
Dear Host Family,
my name is ... and I am 17 years old. I live with my parents ... (55) who works as a law officer, and ... (56) who works as building engineer in ... a borough of Hamburg. My sister ... (21) lives in Greifswald where she studies medicine. Greifswald is at the Baltic Sea in the North East of Germany. I like to spent time at the sea. Especially I like swimming and playing beach volleyball with my sister and her boyfriend.
The relationship between my family and me is very good. We support each other wherever it is possible. We especially like to visit different cities in Europe. We have already been to Lisbon, Berlin, Rome and Vienna in the last years. You can see some photos in the attachment. My mother and I like to cook together. My favorite meal is pancakes with maple syrup but also I like baking e.g. chocolate cakes or cook Chinese food. So if I come to your family I would be glad to cook with you. My father, my sister and I like skiing in March. I really enjoy this time of the year because it is so peaceful in the mountains. Unfortunately my mother doesn’t like skiing. I also like to visit my grandmothers. My father’s mother ... (84) lives in a retirement home and isn’t able to walk anymore. So I often take her on walks with her wheelchair. She really enjoys these trips and I like to listen to her stories from her youth. My other grandmother ... (81) also lives in Hamburg. Sometimes she comes around or we visit her in her flat. Sadly my grandfathers died very early so I haven’t got many memories.
I have a big circle of good acquaintances, but only a few I can rely on. One of them is very important for me. His name is Lauritz and we know each other since we were born. Also our parents are friends and we often spent our holidays together when we were younger and we’re still skiing together. I have a lot of friends from church I work as a team leader and accompany the children’s to their confirmation. Also I visited the travel four times in a row.
My school is called .... I am now in the third semester it is like the 12th session. I am lucky to be in a nice class. I have got a good relationship with all my classmates and also to the other people in my grade, too. There are some subjects I prefer for example History and Sports. I am interested to work on History so I enjoined our family trips to Vienna or Rome. I read magazines about History for example GEO Epoche, too. (welche?)
Besides History I also like to exercise myself. So I often go to the gym with my friends. Before that I have played Basketball for over six years and I have still contact with my old members. I like to take a book if it is rainy outside my lovely genre is fantasy or watch some documentary about animals but I also prefer to play computer mostly I play RPGs (Role Play Gaming).