Hallöchen :)
wir müsen einen Text für die Schule schrieben, welcher dann auch bewertet wird. Und vielleicht könnte ja nochmal jmnd. über meinen drüberlesen um noch ein paar Fehler zu finden die ich nicht bemerkt habe, oder die ich falsch gemacht habe :)
Die Aufgabe lautete: Write a letter to the editor and express your opinion about teenagers on the internet.
Meine Version:
Dear readers,
I think the internet is a fantastic development for teenagers. They can use it for homework or after school activities like listen (ing?) to music, chat with friendsor play games. But not all of this games are good for the kids esspecially those "killer games". The teenagers are trying to become better and better killers. Such games aren't healthy when you play them all day long. In my opinion this games are one main reason for copycat violence.
But not only that fact makes them dangerous. The young people don't do any sports so they gain a lot of weight.
And very often very often the teenagers neglect their schoolwork. Boys, who play those games most, often don't do as well as girls at school.
The computer games can never take the place of face to face social activities.
You see the internet can be very useful und admirable, but you shouldn't spend all your time in front of the computer.
Your, xxx