Hallo ich sitze grade an einem Bericht über mich selbst um mich für einen Englandaustausch zu bewerben. Könntet ihr mir bitte Verbesserungsvorschläge geben und mir Fehler zeigen? Danke im vorraus!
My name is Moritz and I am 15 years old. My birthday is on the * February and I was born in 19**. I live in B*********, a small town near Cologne, with my mother, my stepfather, my sister Hannah and my stepsister Tia. My parents were divorced eight years ago. My sisters are both 12 years old, my mother is 38 years old and my stepfather is 35 years old.
My mother is a German and biology teacher at a secondary school. My stepfather is an architectural draftsman.
I am student at ******Gymnasium, Nettersheim. Before we moved to B*********** me and my family lived in a small village called Houverath where I attended the “Grundschule Houverath” from 2004 until 2008.
I have been playing football in a team since four years and I get guitar lessons since one year. My football team is called “Fc B********” and we train twice a week. Every weekend we have matches. I also really like skiing and I learned it during different holidays with my family.
Last year I took part in a class trip to England where we stayed as a paying guest in the town Eastbourne. It was a nice experience. Half a year later I spent one week alone with a family in France. I really enjoyed spending time with this family and I had the chance to upgrade my French.
I am interested in different cultures and I like travelling very much. We did a lot of big journeys in the last years to different European countries for example France, Switzerland and Greece but also in non European countries like Egypt and Greenland. In Greenland I was impressed to see all the ice landscapes but I was also shocked about the fact that the ice is disappearing.
It would be great to stay in England for a few months because it would be possible to improve my English. It is really important to speak English well. You need to speak English in lots of jobs or if you want to go to another country you can communicate in English nearly everywhere in the world. So English is very important for your life. I also would like to make the experience to learn about traditions of England and to meet new friends; I would like to try out new sports we don´t have in Germany. So I really want to go to England.