Hallo, findet hier irgendeiner stylistische Verbesserungen oder Grammatikfehler, die er berichtigen würde? Wäre Euch sehr verbunden.
Lots of people ask themselves whether there should be laws on sun safety in Australia.
On the one hand you can say that sun is good for us. That's totally right, but on the other hand research shows that sun is also very dangerous. You could get skin cancer which is a dreadful fact.
It's also true that everybody should be free to choose what he wants to do, but if you get skin cancer, it could be much more expensive for the health insurance company because they needs to pay for the medical treatment, so the price for the insurance will go up for everyone in the state.
Above all you mustn't forget about our kids! They need to learn how dangerous sun can be and we all have to protect them against skin cancer.
So all in all, it depends on your point of view. For me personally, there should be laws for sun safety.
LG, Luxa