Essay High School Year USA

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Dear host family, first thank you for reading this essay. That means a lot to me! My name is [...] and I was born on [..]. So I’m [..] years old at the moment. I live in[....], a little town near [...]. I’m used to living in a city. Anyway, we, my mother, my father and my older brother, stay in a house with a garden. My mom Sabine is 49 years old, my father, who’s called Peter, is 49 years old. She often goes walking outside and she’s committed to a social club. He enjoys going sailing and running. In summer we often go sailing together with the whole family. Afterwards we love to go to a restaurant near the lake. From time to time, we play games like Monopoly or something with cards together. My brother David turned 18 a few weeks ago. That means he’s an adult now. He has finished school and he’ll probably travel to South Africa next year and help there. Sometimes he makes me angry because of telling me he needn’t do anything and he can relax all the time. A few years ago he often annoyed me. However, now I’m older and he’s, too, so we get along with each other very well. Anyhow, there’s another member of the family. It’s our cat Lissy. She’s 6 years old and very, very small. When I’m staying with my friends or when we’re are travelling, I miss her most. I love pets overall, especially cats and dogs. I would love to live with a pet in the USA! Unfortunately I’m allergic to guinea pigs, so I can’t be in a house if there are guinea pigs. That’s all about my family, back to me. Something very important at first: I don’t smoke and I don’t drink alcohol. I think you appreciate that I don’t want to start drinking and smoking. After that all I can tell you about some nicer things like doing sport. I have been playing volleyball for three years now and in the USA I would like to continue with volleyball. Hopefully there are some courses at the High School where I’ll go. But if it isn’t possible I’ll try some other sport, perhaps something, that’s quite popular in the US. In Germany soccer is the most famous sport and although I don’t play soccer I’m totally crazy about it, because of being a big fan of the soccer club ‘1.FCN’. I guess going to the stadium here is like going to an American Football match in your country. Besides I enjoy going swimming, too. I don’t do this in a club, because that would be too difficult for me, I just do it for fun. I really like being in the water and most I like diving (without a bottle), because underwater it’s pretty quiet. So I can think about everything without being disturbed by someone. Although I cannot stay there long without breathing it’s one of my favorite things to do in my leisure time. If I don’t feel like doing sport I appreciate reading, as well, particularly English books. After reading ‘The Hunger Games’ and some other books in English I realized that they’re much better than the most of german ones, which were sometimes translated worse.

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Essay High School Year USA

Hier ist mein Essay:

Dear host family, first thank you for reading this essay. That means a lot to me! My name is [...] and I was born on [..]. So I’m [..] years old at the moment. I live in[....], a little town near [...]. I’m used to living in a city. Anyway, we, my mother, my father and my older brother, stay in a house with a garden. My mom Sabine is 49 years old, my father, who’s called Peter, is 49 years old. She often goes walking outside and she’s committed to a social club. He enjoys going sailing and running. In summer we often go sailing together with the whole family. Afterwards we love to go to a restaurant near the lake. From time to time, we play games like Monopoly or something with cards together. My brother David turned 18 a few weeks ago. That means he’s an adult now. He has finished school and he’ll probably travel to South Africa next year and help there. Sometimes he makes me angry because of telling me he needn’t do anything and he can relax all the time. A few years ago he often annoyed me. However, now I’m older and he’s, too, so we get along with each other very well. Anyhow, there’s another member of the family. It’s our cat Lissy. She’s 6 years old and very, very small. When I’m staying with my friends or when we’re are travelling, I miss her most. I love pets overall, especially cats and dogs. I would love to live with a pet in the USA! Unfortunately I’m allergic to guinea pigs, so I can’t be in a house if there are guinea pigs. That’s all about my family, back to me. Something very important at first: I don’t smoke and I don’t drink alcohol. I think you appreciate that I don’t want to start drinking and smoking. After that all I can tell you about some nicer things like doing sport. I have been playing volleyball for three years now and in the USA I would like to continue with volleyball. Hopefully there are some courses at the High School where I’ll go. But if it isn’t possible I’ll try some other sport, perhaps something, that’s quite popular in the US. In Germany soccer is the most famous sport and although I don’t play soccer I’m totally crazy about it, because of being a big fan of the soccer club ‘1.FCN’. I guess going to the stadium here is like going to an American Football match in your country. Besides I enjoy going swimming, too. I don’t do this in a club, because that would be too difficult for me, I just do it for fun. I really like being in the water and most I like diving (without a bottle), because underwater it’s pretty quiet. So I can think about everything without being disturbed by someone. Although I cannot stay there long without breathing it’s one of my favorite things to do in my leisure time. If I don’t feel like doing sport I appreciate reading, as well, particularly English books. After reading ‘The Hunger Games’ and some other books in English I realized that they’re much better than the most of german ones, which were sometimes translated worse.

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I also like to meet friends like almost everyone does. I think I have great friends, but it will be definitely nice to find new in the US. My best ones here are Franzi and Valentina. Franzi is not at my school, she has never been, even not in elementary school. We got to know each other in kindergarten, a long time ago. She’s quite a great person, so she’s the one to make me happy if everything went wrong. I guess she’ll miss me most and I’ll her. Valentina is in my class and she’s sitting next to me. She’s a little bit crazy and she talks quite a lot. By the way, in school my favorite subjects are English, Art and PE (only when we do something funny). Of course it always depends on the teacher. If the teacher is boring or something like that, the lessons won’t be very interesting. At my school we almost have good teachers. My school starts at 7:50 (I have to get up at 6:00) every day and ends at 12:50. Two-times a week the school, where I go by train and by subway, terminates at 15:15 and 13:45. I heard the school begins later in the USA? That would be great, but I can also handle with early time. I’m in 8th grade at a ‘Gymnasium’ (that’s not a room we do sport in, but a school, which was designed to prepare pupils for university. The school graduation is ‘Abitur’). I must admit I like going to school because of seeing friends almost every day and I have an advantage because of learning very fast, that’s also a reason why I want to go abroad. I want to be given a challenge, something I cannot learn for. Furthermore improving my English is a big wish of mine. And, actually, this year would help me a lot, especially with my final exams. I have been learning English for 4 years and I like this language pretty much. That’s why I decided to go to America, too. Frankly, one reason was that I love travelling and I want to see the whole world. I adore the USA, as well, especially the states in the West like California, Washington or Oregon. Because of that I chose this region. Photos of the USA are seen, wherever I go. It would be unbelievably to see this in my real life. Obviously, many rumors about the Americans are spread in Germany (there are only fat people, they only eat fast food…). I would like to be convinced by myself it isn’t like this. I also chose the USA because of the school system. In Germany we haven’t got subjects like ‘journalism’ or ‘photography’ and I think this special subjects will also help me to find out what I want to do when I’m an adult. I only know I don’t want to be a doctor (something to do with medicine) or a teacher. For me, the sum of the reasons is most important. Hopefully, you know me better now and you’ll choose me. Unfortunately I must confess I’m a little bit lazy or messy sometimes, but I promise I’ll do my best! (And nearly every teenager is that, isn’t it?)Enough about me. I hope you really enjoyed reading this and you like my way to live. I’m really looking forward to seeing you! (I annoy all my friends with being that happy all the time, when I think of going to the USA and meeting you). Bye,

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Gaillards Motto lautet: C'est en faisant n'importe quoi qu'on devient n'importe qui !

Aufgrund der Doppeldeutigkeit des Ausdrucks n'importe quoi sind zwei Übersetzungen ins Deutsche möglich: „Indem man irgendetwas macht, wird man irgendwer!“ oder „Indem man Unsinn treibt, wird man irgendwer!“

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