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Is the Grand Canyon dangerous?
The Grand Canyon is a breathtaking view of America's biggest and most beautiful natural attraction.
It had been carved out by the Colorado River over millions of years, and it was 4000 feet from the top to bottom ~ more than four Eiffel Towers!
The Skywalk is a horseshoe-shaped observation platform of glass and steel that sticks out 70 feet into the Canyon, into the air.
The big highlight is the platform's glass floor.
You could walk around and see the Grand Canyon far, far below.
But be careful it can get slippery!
The resort has been used with high-quality materials so that the buildings mix well with the canyon rock.
The Skywalk is a big new tourist attraction.
People say that the Grand Canyon is better than Disneyland.
Visitors wouldn’t have come to the Grand Canyon if Skywalk hadn't been there.
But people are also worried about future projects. A dangerous trend is being started.
“New generations of American are being introduced to the country's natural beauty, that way you learn how to respect nature more.
The Hualapai nation has developed only a very, very small part of the canyon. Nobody can say we’re ruining anything.
It's the double standard that isn't fair:
When you develop the land, it‘s OK.
But when Native Americans do something with their own reservation, it's suddenly not OK.
We’ve become good business people.
We reinvest in the environment and spend a lot of our money in nature”, says PR Manager Mya Whitecloud.
But even still there must be a way to help the environment and give the tribes a chance for business development.
Don’t you think so?!
Written by Shane Warner